by Lisa Frost
Member since:
April 24, 2007

The dream- niftyfifty #2

October 20, 2008 06:40 PM EDT (Updated: October 20, 2008 06:58 PM EDT)
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The sky's looking funny

though it is sunny

not shades of blue

A fence stretched around

And covered the ground

As I walked towards you

The leaves fell down

And mom was uptown

Doing some shopping too

When on the breeze

Somebody sneezed

and the tree said God bless you!
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Comments: 29

Bridget ♥ Oct 20, 2008, 6:43pm EDT
Nicely done!
William Dotani Oct 20, 2008, 6:45pm EDT
Nice Alice in Wonderland type touch.
Heather ~of the Whippets~ M. Oct 20, 2008, 6:45pm EDT
Cute poem, Lisa. It fits nicely with the theme.
glenda j. Oct 20, 2008, 6:47pm EDT
cute
Lisa Frost Oct 20, 2008, 6:59pm EDT
Reena, I don't know how I missed posting this to the group I originally wrote it for!!!
Alison H. Oct 20, 2008, 7:08pm EDT
Whimsical, like a nursery rhyme!
Lisa Frost Oct 20, 2008, 7:08pm EDT
Hey all thanks!!!

This is what working in a daycare for 6 years will do to you. I still wake up screaming when I hear the Barney song...lol
Lisa Frost Oct 20, 2008, 7:13pm EDT
Ok, I admit it, i like Barney..lol
Delightful poem Lisa. well done
Elaine S. Oct 20, 2008, 7:35pm EDT
very cute
C C. Oct 20, 2008, 7:46pm EDT
very nice
Missy Cline Oct 20, 2008, 7:51pm EDT
adorable!!!
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Oct 20, 2008, 7:53pm EDT
well done,Lisa
Alison Pearce Oct 20, 2008, 8:01pm EDT
Fabulous!!
P.W. Dowdy Oct 20, 2008, 8:21pm EDT
Thank you.

No blessing I receive is never given amiss. Love the sweetness of this, Lisa!
Brian T. Oct 20, 2008, 8:26pm EDT
Thank you for sharing your poem
Kerrell g. Oct 20, 2008, 10:54pm EDT
(+:
aratma d. Oct 21, 2008, 4:50am EDT
Magic tree, I tell you.
Wonderfully done, Lisa
Donna T. Oct 21, 2008, 5:46am EDT
very cute!
Kelly Kay Oct 21, 2008, 11:17am EDT
Springy and cute!
vijay kumar Oct 21, 2008, 1:03pm EDT
Sweet poem. A true delight, Lisa.
Chana M. Oct 21, 2008, 6:11pm EDT
Lisa this is very sweet. Thank you!
Elsie Duggan Oct 21, 2008, 7:39pm EDT
Fantastic Lisa, I love it.
Deb J. Oct 22, 2008, 2:12pm EDT
Love these cute little poems Lisa!! So sweet, like you!
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Danielle P. Oct 23, 2008, 10:04am EDT
Very nice.
Sheila Deeth Oct 23, 2008, 1:15pm EDT
That was fun and cute.
Beth G. Nov 11, 2008, 9:59pm EST
lol this is so cute Lisa! thanks for sharing!

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