by Sandra T.

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June 22, 2007

Night time Haiku

November 03, 2007 12:36 AM EDT

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Darkness falls over

purple panzies outside my

door, turning them black.

I was going to change it to "pansies" but I think I like the "z"... it's just like me... unperfect in every way 8)

Tags: haiku, flowers, darkness, poem, poetry

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Comments: 30

*LORA* M. Nov 3, 2007, 12:38am EDT

very nice here

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Amanda "middle of nowhere" C. Nov 3, 2007, 12:39am EDT

Sweet dreams, Sandra!

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Susan E. Nov 3, 2007, 12:41am EDT

That's lovely Sandra.

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Jule's dreamin of a wonderfilled life for all research mode again Nov 3, 2007, 12:43am EDT

Nice one ( Pansies ) not Panzies

you never saw the get well picture essay I wrote for you or you did not coment?

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dee b. Nov 3, 2007, 12:53am EDT

nice sandra

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Rick Dreamie Nov 3, 2007, 12:53am EDT

Great Haiku!

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Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Nov 3, 2007, 12:54am EDT

Well done....a nice image and purple pansies are so close to being black anyway.

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Sandra T. Nov 3, 2007, 12:57am EDT

Jules I didn't... I'll go look.
And I wanted to spell it that way but Rick said they were spelled with a "z" next time I'll follow my gut! Thanks all!

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penni d. Nov 3, 2007, 1:00am EDT

i like it with z......different

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Michelle K. Nov 3, 2007, 1:04am EDT

good job. man, how many groups do you post to!! I'm going to join some of your groups. My haiku only had 4 or 5 hits.

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Dena Straughn Nov 3, 2007, 1:25am EDT

nice

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Haim Kadman Nov 3, 2007, 3:08am EDT

It's rather nice with the "z", and who's perfect after all?

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Lune Wolfsong Nov 3, 2007, 3:36am EDT

I like your panzied style. ;)

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Mother Toad (Gail, Love the Spring, season and step Nov 3, 2007, 3:39am EDT

Points for you

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Christine P. Nov 3, 2007, 8:45am EDT

All the signs of summer are disappearing fast. when the pansies give up the fight to hold on just one more day.
Love the haiku,

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Stacie N. Nov 3, 2007, 9:00am EDT

I like the z as well.

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Denise B. Nov 3, 2007, 9:17am EDT

nice

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Anne B. Grote Nov 3, 2007, 10:28am EDT

sad and winsome!

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Sammie B. Nov 3, 2007, 12:21pm EDT

Nice imagery. Cute haiku.

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Phyllis R. Nov 3, 2007, 1:16pm EDT

This is nice, I think the 'z' is neat!!!

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Nancy S. Nov 3, 2007, 1:19pm EDT

Nice haiku Sandra.

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Leigh M. Nov 3, 2007, 1:32pm EDT

This haiku is very nice. the imagery is wonderful.

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Cristina S. Nov 3, 2007, 2:19pm EDT

cute haiku, like the z!

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j - Frugal Mom - r. Nov 3, 2007, 3:01pm EDT

This is very nice Sandra

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Kimberly Ripley Nov 3, 2007, 8:48pm EDT

I like the z, too!

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Otelia S. Nov 5, 2007, 1:57pm EST

Nice and true!

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donna h. Nov 6, 2007, 11:16am EST

nice

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Leah A. Nov 7, 2007, 11:46am EST

Purple and black - two of my favorite colors. Nice haiku.

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J W. Nov 8, 2007, 3:46am EST

good haiku

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