by Kylee S.
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July 28, 2007

A Short Ode to my bed

September 03, 2007 10:56 PM EDT (Updated: September 03, 2007 10:58 PM EDT)
views: 56 | comments: 28

Evening

Beckons

My tired limbs

To a nocturnal paradise

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Comments: 28

*Carol ~Bronx Southern Belle D. Sep 3, 2007, 11:20pm EDT
Nice thought for the lucky who don't suffer from insomnia. I stayed awake last night until 8:15 am. , so your haiku really got to me.
April J. Sep 3, 2007, 11:24pm EDT
I'm starting to feel this way now... :)
Helen C.D.~2009 ~. Sep 3, 2007, 11:35pm EDT
You've got that right!
Kylee S. Sep 3, 2007, 11:50pm EDT
Thanks Carol,April, and Helen. Right now, I am still up, my body is tire, but my brain is still awake.
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Sep 4, 2007, 12:00am EDT
Short and sweet.
Kylee S. Sep 4, 2007, 12:23am EDT
thanks brenda
good thiiings come in small packages
10 friend
JoAnne D. Sep 4, 2007, 1:37am EDT
That came in at a good time. I'm getting sleepy.
Can I take two and call ya in the morning?
Sue D. Sep 4, 2007, 2:17am EDT
I am getting sleepy too! Nice write. Bed sounds really good
Teresa W. Sep 4, 2007, 4:05am EDT
Cool! I love my bed and your poem speaks to my tired old bones but you said it much nicer! :-)
Lisa Frost Sep 4, 2007, 8:46am EDT
I have been up because I woke up in the night. Why couldn't I have read this then...Now I am up. Great poem
Kylee S. Sep 4, 2007, 9:06am EDT
Thanks
Lisa
Reena
Teresa
Oz
Sue
JoAnne
Julia
JoAnne D. Sep 4, 2007, 11:08am EDT
Good morning, I still like this. Have a good day.
Danielle G. Sep 4, 2007, 12:08pm EDT
Nothing better then a bed when you are tired.
Rita j. Sep 4, 2007, 1:23pm EDT
good
Kylee S. Sep 4, 2007, 1:39pm EDT
Thanks
JoAnne
Danielle
Rita
Sarah (I want points) Sep 4, 2007, 2:16pm EDT
nice, short, to the point :) I enjoy my bed too :)
Kylee S. Sep 4, 2007, 2:54pm EDT
Thanks, Sarah
Kylee S. Sep 5, 2007, 2:07pm EDT
Thanks Mike
Otelia S. Sep 6, 2007, 1:12pm EDT
WOW, Day is doing that to me right now.
Amanda C. Sep 6, 2007, 2:15pm EDT
10
Jaime R. Sep 6, 2007, 2:41pm EDT
I feel the same way about my bed!
Kylee S. Sep 6, 2007, 7:19pm EDT
Thanks
Otelia
Amanda
Jamie
Heidi M. Sep 6, 2007, 9:42pm EDT
ahhhhh! nice.
Kylee S. Sep 7, 2007, 3:26pm EDT
Thanks Heidi

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