On the lap of hope,
We all see dreams to find our queen of heart
Who may loving, caring, good at heart,
Beautiful and smart.Some of us begin to search,
Without tiring and caring of rest.We wait a lot and keep patience too much.
And by luck we meet to our search.We begin to like her.
We find her image here and there.
We make promises and swear.
We forget our self and think about only her.We feel like love in our heart.
We dream to make her our life’s part.
We think she is another wheel of cart.
And one day we purpose to our sweet heart.She does deny,
Because she is in love of another guy.
The breaking of heart makes a noise,
Why? Why and why?
Rajendra Singh Solanki
Copyright ©2007 Rajendra Singh Solanki
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Warm regards from Moscow, Russia -
Sveta
thanks julie
thanks susan
thanks svet
thanks larry
you are right jamie. thanks a lot
i'm agree with u anna
As for me, you know I have the greatest guy in the world, and you know, he knows, and everyone around us knows how much we LOVE EACHOTHER. I would never do to him what all girls have been accused of doing in this poem.
Good poem!
Although according to my set rules for my group"C" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "C" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "W" Not "C", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "C".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.
Although according to my set rules for my group " "E" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "E" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "W" Not "E", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "E".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.
Although according to my set rules for my group"D" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "D" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "W" Not "D", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "D".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.