by tuwanda t.
Member since:
August 20, 2006

Between Mr. & Mrs.

October 29, 2006 08:55 AM EST (Updated: October 30, 2006 02:31 PM EST)
views: 33 | rating: 10/10 (10 votes) | comments: 28

 

When the full moon is full

I know what filled it up

Love between a Mr. and a Mrs.

Your sweet and tender touch

I need so much

 

When the tide comes rolling in

That's when the love begins

In you

my lover

my friend

 

By the warmth of the fire place

I lie thinking about joyful days

You and I spent together

In snow stormy weather

 

My love is so sweet

A true love complete

 

Now is the time I need him most

I am so proud I could easily boast

 

I've been looking for something to write

To my surprise this came in the night

 

Love comes in like a gentle breeze

Right now you are my heart's ease

In the mist of my pain

I don't feel ashamed

 

It is plainly clear to me

That you are here for me

It's that Love between a Mr. an a Mrs.

A sweet and tender touch

that I need so much

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Comments: 28

Kathryn E. Oct 29, 2006, 9:16am EST
Very tender and loving, tuwanda. You write from the heart and that is a very good thing.
tuwanda t. Oct 29, 2006, 9:20am EST
Thank you Kathryn . I do write from the heart .
Shaunee C. Oct 29, 2006, 5:37pm EST
very good I enjoyed reading this.
tuwanda t. Oct 29, 2006, 6:53pm EST
Thank you Shaunee
guy arneson Oct 29, 2006, 7:42pm EST
That is so sweet tuwanda :O) you have a beautiful loving spirit about you.
tuwanda t. Oct 29, 2006, 7:45pm EST
Thanks Guy
Carol Roach Oct 29, 2006, 8:27pm EST
may i suggest something like when the bright moon is full,

because a full moon is full so that is redundant.

Great poem,
tuwanda t. Oct 29, 2006, 8:48pm EST
Thank you Carol
William M. Oct 30, 2006, 1:30am EST
Beautiful poem. 10+
tuwanda t. Oct 30, 2006, 7:26am EST
Thank you William
Jared G. Oct 30, 2006, 11:28am EST
Nice!
amanda wallin Oct 30, 2006, 11:41am EST
Did you mean "boast" rather than boost? Otherwise a touching poem filled with passion.
Olivia S. Oct 30, 2006, 1:43pm EST
A lovely poem by a lovely woman.
tuwanda t. Oct 30, 2006, 2:39pm EST
Thank you Jared and Olivia for your comments .
tuwanda t. Oct 30, 2006, 2:43pm EST
Thank you Amanda . You must have wonderful eyesight .

The word boast is what I meant . Thank you .
Yvette F. Oct 31, 2006, 11:02pm EST
Very nice.
tuwanda t. Nov 1, 2006, 1:23am EST
Thank you Yvette
Varnell H Nov 3, 2006, 10:04pm EST
Well written, and continue to write more
Edward Nudelman Nov 4, 2006, 7:39am EST
very endearing and serene love letter in poem. superb.
tuwanda t. Nov 4, 2006, 7:14pm EST
Oh ! Thanks
Ludie Gee Nov 5, 2006, 10:55am EST
A charming piece - ideal as a valentine I would say - Thank you for this wonderful reminder of what should be.
tuwanda t. Nov 5, 2006, 12:18pm EST
Ludolf thank you for your kindness .
Jewel Hughes Nov 13, 2006, 8:44pm EST
Nicely written.
:-)
tuwanda t. Nov 16, 2006, 10:29am EST
Thank you Jewel .
Esaiah Udhayakumar Nov 30, 2006, 1:58am EST
lovely love poem, thanks tuwanda
Minnette McPaul Dec 1, 2006, 7:48am EST
I admire the feelings you've expressed here. Love truly seems like a full moon for it gives completion.
tuwanda t. May 21, 2007, 10:30pm EDT
Thank you Esaiah and Minnette .
annette p. Sep 11, 2007, 4:06pm EDT
that is so sweet thought of you, love burst in your heart because of love,,

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