by tuwanda t.
Member since:
August 20, 2006

A Kiss To You

October 25, 2006 08:45 PM EDT (Updated: October 25, 2006 10:55 PM EDT)
views: 150 | rating: 9.7/10 (21 votes) | comments: 35

Many years have passed us by

Honey I have  heard your sigh

 

They say a man ain' t  suppose to cry 

 I miss you so much I could die

 

Every dog has his day

is what you use to say

 

You were in pain

and so was I

 

You never told me why

but you use to cry

 

I held your hand

I wondered why

 

Its been a long time

your still on my mind

 

My claim to fame it died

I still feel for you inside

 

Its been  years

heartache and tears

 

I can see your smile

Can we  talk for a while

 

I am still crazy over you

Are you still crazy for me  too

 

We use to stick together like glue

Here's my heart a kiss to you

 

 

 

 

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Comments: 35

William M. Oct 25, 2006, 9:03pm EDT
Beautiful expression of emotions.
tuwanda t. Oct 25, 2006, 9:07pm EDT
Thank you William .
Leah Christensen Oct 25, 2006, 9:14pm EDT
Fantastic!
Michael A. Oct 25, 2006, 9:16pm EDT
Excellent, tuwanda!
julian 'blighted karma' three Oct 25, 2006, 9:19pm EDT
Just as William said, a lovely expression of simple, pure emotion from the heart.
Cassandra M. Oct 25, 2006, 9:24pm EDT
Very nice! :)
Amy just hangin' out M. Oct 25, 2006, 9:39pm EDT
Beautiful and very touching!
Shaunee C. Oct 26, 2006, 12:56am EDT
sounds great
Ruth MacGill Oct 26, 2006, 1:08am EDT
Big sigh ----------! Those were the days!
Jay H. Oct 26, 2006, 1:22am EDT
This is great so full of feeling and love
guy arneson Oct 26, 2006, 4:13am EDT
ooooohhhh. My heart felt that one.
Spiritguided Woman Oct 26, 2006, 6:44am EDT
You go girl!
Susan A. Oct 26, 2006, 8:21am EDT
Terrific-strong
Shelly W. Oct 26, 2006, 8:24am EDT
Lovely, emotional,heartfelt, and true blue, nice one tuwanda
tuwanda t. Oct 26, 2006, 8:37am EDT
Hi Shell thank you .

I am off today just waiting on that morning punch from you .
annette p. Oct 26, 2006, 11:55am EDT
its very sweet of you and a great poet you are..
tuwanda t. Oct 26, 2006, 12:49pm EDT
Thank you Anita .
Demongirl A.K.A. Girl Toy Oct 26, 2006, 2:31pm EDT
Beautifully well written!! I give it a 10!!
gautami tripathy Oct 26, 2006, 2:43pm EDT
This is GOOD!
Ludie Gee Oct 27, 2006, 10:35am EDT
i like this - you should put this to music and make a chart topper
Jewel Hughes Oct 27, 2006, 1:33pm EDT
Heart felt emotions run in this poem great read definatly made me take a sihh
Edward Nudelman Oct 28, 2006, 12:55pm EDT
Very nice love letter
Olivia S. Oct 30, 2006, 1:48pm EST
Again, a lovely poem by a lovely woman.
Barin M. Oct 31, 2006, 4:50am EST
Painful passages through these words are coming: I mean these two poems, this one and 'darken soul', Tuwanda! I can see some kind of raw matirial for spiritual process too! And that makes me more hopeful about your poetry and its expressive future!
tuwanda t. Oct 31, 2006, 6:30am EST
Yes Barin I have learned many spiritual lessons in my life .

Thank you ,
amanda wallin Nov 2, 2006, 5:13am EST
Very relatable, you sound like an empath with a broken heart. Excellent poem!
tuwanda t. Nov 2, 2006, 8:57am EST
Thank you .
Minnette McPaul Dec 1, 2006, 7:54am EST
Oh wow, one of those ones that are sad and beautiful all in one. You have a lovely way with expression.
tuwanda t. Jan 21, 2007, 7:16pm EST
Thank you Minnette .
Patricia I. Jan 29, 2008, 11:09am EST
So Beautiful, thanks for sharing
necee t. May 21, 2008, 4:31pm EDT
i am very late... this was really beautiful... i wonder how things are for you now...
Blessings...
Shelbia C. May 22, 2008, 12:40am EDT
Beautiful and sad.
Ashley P. May 27, 2008, 9:42pm EDT
Quite a call to love. emotionally charged
Olumide Akinwumi-Oke Sep 26, 2008, 9:07am EDT
This is a real deep need to love... Heartaches are difficult. No matter how adept - yu may never be able to fully explore it. Nice one
Lexa Daily Jan 26, 2009, 1:00am EST
Love is not always like the fairytales. Well written.

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