A childhood memory
An unfriendly ghost
I hungered for your love
You could only give me roast
Meat rich in protein
makes the body whole
Jealousy Hatred
out of control
One of you loved me
One of you too cold
Another somewhat sweet
The other a darken soul
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An unfriendly ghost
I hungered for your love
After reading this much of your poem I thought it was going to be about someone that hurt you during childhood even though you just wanted to be loved. So the rest just left me saying WHAT!!!
hungered for the love of a mother who was not able to be a mother to the child .
The unfriendly ghost is another story . It was thrown in for good measure .
Namaste
I prayed for God to show me my hidden talent and I remembered I love to write .
I am learning and growing . I'm also a big Fleet Wood Mc and Stevie Nicks fan .
so I took away the last three verses .
I had to call on a dear friend here whom I could trust .
He said it look good to him .
ED said it was great . That made me feel good but I was in so much emotional pain It upset my equalliberium .
Finally I was clearly able to see it was one of the saddest things I had ever read in
my life and it was all true and all about me .
Every day that the sun came up
She would beat me where she lay
You can always call on me .
There are others who are very loving here at Gather .
An ohh how we love one another so deeply .