In Darkest Night

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William M. Oct 19, 2006, 10:31am EDT

Lovely.

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Varnell H Oct 19, 2006, 12:30pm EDT

It's nice to find light at the end of the tunnel, great piece continue to write.

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tuwanda t. Oct 19, 2006, 1:15pm EDT

Thank you William ,Janine and Varnell . That is what happen for me .
The lesson I learned was to know that all things are more than possible through prayer.

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Leigh V. Oct 19, 2006, 1:29pm EDT

Nice work Tuwanda.

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Shelly W. Oct 19, 2006, 1:31pm EDT

Through the dark there can be great light,illuminating, through all battles, scras or not, Sgell

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tuwanda t. Oct 19, 2006, 1:33pm EDT

Thank you Leigh

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tuwanda t. Oct 19, 2006, 1:39pm EDT

Thanks shell

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Cheryl W. Oct 19, 2006, 2:01pm EDT

Very nice..

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tuwanda t. Oct 19, 2006, 3:53pm EDT

ThanksCheryl .

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Jewel Hughes Oct 19, 2006, 7:30pm EDT

Great poem and thanks so much for the welcome back post.

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julian 'blighted karma' three Oct 19, 2006, 7:53pm EDT

Very nice; your spacing and punctuation sometimes remind me a lityle of another poet, e e cummings, you're probably very familiar with his fine work; and the way that your poem takes the reader through the dark valley but ends on the upward note is very good! Well done!

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Barin M. Oct 20, 2006, 12:50am EDT

Its one kind of experience menifested here by you as a test performence regarding love! It is my way of grasping this poem Tuwanda! You have written it with a simplicity as well as a passive prose rytham ... which is effective too!

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