by Ladybounty ~.
Member since:
August 8, 2006

My Heart

July 25, 2008 09:22 AM EDT
views: 51 | comments: 26

You took my heart away today

Wrapped it safely for travel

And, I trusted you

To carry it gently

Circling the globe as you often do

Now I sit an empty shell, waiting

My thoughts traveling, too

Knowing that you will walk carefully

And return it to me when you are through

 

 

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Comments: 26

Ladybounty ~. Jul 25, 2008, 9:43am EDT
What a beautiful thing to say Selene....thank you!
Spencer T. Jul 25, 2008, 11:18am EDT
I can't help but melt in the essence of your words. Gorgeous stuff.
Cara D. Jul 25, 2008, 11:24am EDT
That was Great!
Sonia M. Jul 25, 2008, 2:13pm EDT
You have a way of expressing your thoughts so clearly and beautifully, Lori. ....I agree, you have a gift.
Ladybounty ~. Jul 25, 2008, 6:13pm EDT
Awwwwww you guys are just too good to me.
Thank you for all the amazing compliments! They warm my old heart and
You all inspire me to write more...
Sammie B. Aug 2, 2008, 3:10pm EDT
I really liked this poem. it was very fluid, rolled off the tongue easily, and carried a lot of deep emotion. Wonderful write!
Ladybounty ~. Aug 3, 2008, 11:44am EDT
thank you so much for the wonderful compliment Sammie!
Nurse Nancy S. Aug 10, 2008, 6:26am EDT
Here's a BIG 10!!!

Because this deserves a

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Ladybounty ~. Aug 10, 2008, 6:40am EDT
thanks for the BIG star and compliment Nancy!
Adina P. Aug 10, 2008, 11:40am EDT
very fluid and pleasant to the ear...
Ladybounty ~. Aug 10, 2008, 11:46am EDT
Thank you Atlantis! Thats one of the biggest compliments.....I think I've ever gotten.
You use your eyes to read it but say it's pleasant to your ear......lovely.....ty
t r. Aug 10, 2008, 1:00pm EDT
Very, very nice.
Ladybounty ~. Aug 10, 2008, 2:18pm EDT
Thanks Tami!
Kushal Poddar Aug 11, 2008, 11:57am EDT
"To carry it gently
Circling the globe as you often do" excellent
Shelbia C. Aug 11, 2008, 11:52pm EDT
I like this. It is very well written.
Very lovely. Nicely written.
Ladybounty ~. Aug 12, 2008, 8:50am EDT
Thank you Poddar.....Shelbia and Katie Scarlett.
Your kind words really mean a lot to me!
Deborah M. Aug 20, 2008, 11:54pm EDT
Lovely work. . . simple and straight forward. Innocent. :) Thank you
Ladybounty ~. Aug 21, 2008, 5:16pm EDT
Hey Deborah.....I'm so glad you could read this and thanks for your kind words!
Haim Kadman Aug 22, 2008, 10:59am EDT
A great poem, moving and with so much promise, thanks Lori.
Ladybounty ~. Aug 23, 2008, 10:13am EDT
Thank you Haim!
Winton Charles Hopper III Aug 28, 2008, 7:00pm EDT
Great poem Lori... short and sweet, but so much said... A ten...
Ladybounty ~. Aug 29, 2008, 10:44am EDT
Thanks dear Scottie....I appreciate the compliment!
Melanie B. Oct 20, 2008, 11:35pm EDT
So very lovely~ ~Thanks for sharing.
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