by Heidianna "Coriander" T.
Member since:
April 1, 2007

Poem - Whispers

October 19, 2007 02:20 PM EDT
views: 44 | comments: 21

whispers
trees rustling in the the wind
secret words untold
harmony of hearts
spoken by not a voice
but a transfer of electricity
from my body to yours

the spark, the surge,
the gentle caress of thoughts
still unspoken but received
through your eyes

don't shield your eyes from me
don't cloud them with wild anger or hurt
don't just wait until I speak
confront me with your touch

i could love you so much

 

Written by H. Terpening (that's me) 

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Comments: 21

Heart Stone Oct 19, 2007, 2:34pm EDT
Great writing.
Rita j. Oct 19, 2007, 2:38pm EDT
nice
Trish A. Oct 19, 2007, 2:40pm EDT
Nice poem.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Oct 19, 2007, 2:56pm EDT
Excellent CORI....


waiting to read more from you..
Rima S. Oct 19, 2007, 3:29pm EDT
This is lovely a poem, Cori..being able to touch people not with harmony but with love and care...
Sammie B. Oct 19, 2007, 5:23pm EDT
That's great! You really capture the essence of your thoughts. I especially love the last line. It holds so much power in concluding the poem.
Kay M. Oct 19, 2007, 8:02pm EDT
Very nice!
Brenda (square peg in a round hole) H. Oct 19, 2007, 8:12pm EDT
Very nice Cori.
ChrisJerri S. Oct 19, 2007, 8:47pm EDT
nice poem, you have a pen name?
Lawrence U. Oct 19, 2007, 10:35pm EDT
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.
queen.susan . Oct 19, 2007, 11:30pm EDT
Wonderfully written, Cori!
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Teresa W. Oct 20, 2007, 7:10am EDT
Nice poem, I featured you in my group Hodge Podge Fun!!
Roxanna K. Oct 20, 2007, 8:24am EDT
This is great Cori. Love it.
Peter Joseph Swanson Oct 20, 2007, 9:57pm EDT
MARVELOUS!!!!

10!!! YAY WOOT!
Danielle P. Oct 21, 2007, 4:12pm EDT
I FEEL it. Great poem, Cori!!!
Headof Redd Oct 21, 2007, 7:47pm EDT
"the spark, the surge,
the gentle caress of thoughts" Fave part right there.
Heidianna "Coriander" T. Oct 21, 2007, 9:09pm EDT
Shh - Coriander is my nickname. Or Cori. :)

Thank you everyone for your comments! Teresa, that is so lovely of you to feature me! Thank you so much!

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