by *LORA* M.

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February 13, 2007

Ouch! (poem)

April 19, 2007 08:40 PM EDT

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Your fingers pricked

Blood drops

Tears fall

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Comments: 13

Connie C. Apr 19, 2007, 8:49pm EDT

Oh it sounds like a child is hurt.

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Anne Marie A. Apr 19, 2007, 8:50pm EDT

a trip to the doctor maybe finger prick

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William M. Apr 19, 2007, 8:51pm EDT

I like it.

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Vikki M. Apr 19, 2007, 8:53pm EDT

Ow... my finger hurts just reading this. :-)

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Ms. Meacham: Money Maven Apr 19, 2007, 8:55pm EDT

How quiet and delicate. Thank you so much Lora for sharing.

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Picture Me 3D Mel Apr 19, 2007, 8:59pm EDT

sounds like a diabetic the first time

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Matt O. Apr 19, 2007, 10:40pm EDT

Thanks for sharing Lora.

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Sandra L. Apr 19, 2007, 10:57pm EDT

Interesting poem. What was the reason behind it?

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Melanie N. Apr 19, 2007, 11:11pm EDT

I agree with Connie C....it sounds as if a child was hurt

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Alicia Storey Apr 20, 2007, 1:46am EDT

i agree sounds if a child was hurt

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donna h. Apr 20, 2007, 7:01am EDT

yikey!

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*LORA* M. Apr 20, 2007, 4:58pm EDT

It really is not about anything particular other then something that can happen to you. I just like the way it formed so wrote it. t/y

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