by *LORA* M.
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February 13, 2007

Seasons of time (poem)

March 25, 2007 04:14 PM EDT (Updated: March 26, 2007 12:19 AM EDT)
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                                                        High on a mountain top

                                                        Feeling just fine

                                                        Next thing life hits

                                                        Crying is mine

                                                        Sadness soon comes

                                                        The bright light shines

                                                        This is what we go through

                                                        The seasons of time

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Comments: 25

Vinay Benjamin Mar 25, 2007, 4:18pm EDT
Lora the ending line is the clincher!! Superb . . .
*LORA* M. Mar 25, 2007, 4:20pm EDT
thank you Vinay!
JoAnne D. Mar 25, 2007, 4:20pm EDT
Nice work, Lora
Laurun M. Mar 25, 2007, 4:22pm EDT
Luckily time heals all. Nice poem.
Deb J. Mar 25, 2007, 4:27pm EDT
Hey, that's good Lora...keep on writing them poems!
William M. Mar 25, 2007, 4:37pm EDT
I like it, Lora.
Sherry Asbury Mar 25, 2007, 4:50pm EDT
Good stuff!!
Wilma M. Mar 25, 2007, 5:15pm EDT
Great poem. I like it!
Anne Marie A. Mar 25, 2007, 5:18pm EDT
seasons of time very nice poem and appropriately titled
Armand F. Mar 25, 2007, 5:35pm EDT
Wow, great poem. Cycles upon cycles upon cycles upon.......
donna h. Mar 25, 2007, 6:33pm EDT
eternal
Audrey F. Mar 25, 2007, 7:16pm EDT
Marvelous poem, Lora! It really moved me!
Carol Lloyd Mar 25, 2007, 7:23pm EDT
Nice work, Lora
Lawrence U. Mar 25, 2007, 8:37pm EDT
Awesome. The line: "The bright light shines" does it for me. I love it!
*LORA* M. Mar 25, 2007, 8:49pm EDT
thank you and God bless you all
*LORA* M. Mar 25, 2007, 10:39pm EDT
For along time, but mostly I just write off the top of my head or as the Lord leads me to. thanks for the compliment
Lisa J Mar 25, 2007, 11:11pm EDT
Lora, that is really great. May I ask why season's was made possessive?
J. C. Mar 25, 2007, 11:33pm EDT
Well done!
Barbara N. Mar 26, 2007, 8:44am EDT
I wish I could be so creative, I just have no talent for poetry but I am working on it. Very nice
*LORA* M. Mar 26, 2007, 9:37am EDT
sure you do Barb and thank you
Donna K. Mar 26, 2007, 3:47pm EDT
Wonderful and evocative! Just perfect!
Connie C. Mar 26, 2007, 7:33pm EDT
great poem
Phylis S. Jun 26, 2007, 11:14pm EDT
I love that last line Lora. Phylis
Heather C. Dec 9, 2007, 10:19pm EST
Excellent!
Heather C. Dec 10, 2007, 12:28am EST
And so very very true!

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