I'm following clues trying to locate some Snippets. Hmmm, I better keep looking.
Terry, thanx very much for reading Another Full Circle, I'm thinking I should rewrite the ending or somehow to clarify that Sally the junkie is in fact Rudyard's daughter, and Tricia whose life he saved is his granddaughter. Perhaps if along with the clothes he covered her with, there is also the lei he had promised to bring Sally for her tenth birthday, would that be the right kind of change, what do you think about that?
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Thanks for commenting on my short story. You are so nice.
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Terry, thanx very much for reading Another Full Circle, I'm thinking I should rewrite the ending or somehow to clarify that Sally the junkie is in fact Rudyard's daughter, and Tricia whose life he saved is his granddaughter. Perhaps if along with the clothes he covered her with, there is also the lei he had promised to bring Sally for her tenth birthday, would that be the right kind of change, what do you think about that?
THANX again and for the Snippet clues also.
Have a Wonder FULL! AND a Great Weekend FULL.