Hay-Ku of the Day (If "I" Were Smart)

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J W. Jun 28, 2008, 12:18pm EDT

good haiku

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Renda B~surviving the storm by dancing in the rain. Jun 28, 2008, 12:40pm EDT

Isn't it the truth? Nicely done. I love the yard ornament.

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Ann C. Jun 28, 2008, 1:05pm EDT

I like it! :)

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Angela P. Jun 28, 2008, 1:15pm EDT

Great!

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Patricia J. Jun 28, 2008, 2:32pm EDT

This is really awesome, Richard.

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myles paulsen Jun 28, 2008, 10:10pm EDT

Quick, hit it on the head with a mallet and maybe it will go back to where it came from.

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Chana M. Jun 28, 2008, 11:07pm EDT

Thank you for sharing this @ We Comment Back!.

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JoAnne D. Jun 29, 2008, 8:42am EDT

I like this one, it's funny but true.

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Richard Hay Jun 29, 2008, 5:03pm EDT

Trouble is, Myles, "I" can't tell the difference between "it and me" (I as I think and I as I Am) most of the time and would probably only end up hitting "myself" in the head.

Or if the Consciousness Awareness I Am is "The Nector of the Lord's Feet," as Sri Nisargadatta once suggested, "Shoot myself in the Foot." ROFLOL

PS: And, as my Buddy Charlie would probably ask, "Who holds the mallet"?

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myles paulsen Jun 30, 2008, 12:38am EDT

Well, perhaps a mallet across the head MIGHT help, but I will be generous enough to suggest it be made of wood, like the target area itself. As for the "Nectar of the Lord's feet", it sounds like a pair of sweaty gym socks, and you can keep it ALL to yourself!

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