I liked it very much. Although very deep aeasonal haikus can be wonderful - I love the subject matetr you have captured here. :-) I would not mind reading a few about the greatness of teachers either, especially these days when I hardly have time to sleep between grading and end of tern duties. I am having a break now and have allowed myself 7 more minutes to surf before I have to sit down again.
That was pretty good! I like how you wrote the last line of each verse. Each line made a reference to life and also good rhyming one the tenced, blended, and mended.
Thanks everyone. I brought a copy of it over to the ER staff tonight on my way to visit Mama. Especially after the negative publicity one ER is getting lately, I wanted this bunch to know they were appreciated. I am fully convinced they saved her life by responding to the potassium deficiency so quickly.
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Anyway - loverly 5-7-5 haiku.
So well said!
Thanks!
Go Mary Beth....Yea!
As long as (M) your mom is getting stronger....
Gayle