How wrong I was

My dearest, I will alway's love you,

and miss you every second of my day and

night.You will forever be in my thought's

and dreams.

I thought you would be beside me forever,

oh how wrong I was about us together.

Swinging on our porch swing together in our olding

age.

Oh how wrong I was.

One thing will remain my love for

you.

Through thick and then ,happy times and

sad, even angry times when we were mad,

I loved you so, but your love walked away, oh

how I wrong I was.

So intense uncertain times, with great confusion,

distress, depression and restlessness.One thing

remains ,my undying love for you.

Tears of sadness rolls down from my brown eyes.

I have one wish that one day you,you'll realize.

Oh how wrong you were.

Comments: 12

Christina Hagle Nov 25, 2006, 3:05am EST

very touching.......

reply to this comment

Wendy F. Nov 25, 2006, 3:41am EST

Very sad !

reply to this comment

Jenna is around here somewhere s. Nov 25, 2006, 4:22am EST

:.. ) very sad and well written...

reply to this comment

Esaiah Udhayakumar Nov 25, 2006, 4:35am EST

keep it up

reply to this comment

Lisa B. Nov 25, 2006, 9:59am EST

So sad and I understand. I am always here for you.

reply to this comment

Marsha F. Nov 25, 2006, 10:51am EST

I like it, Robin. Having felt it, though, I know people can move on after feeling just the way you described so well. That's the good thing.
Have a good weekend!

reply to this comment

Michelle R. Nov 25, 2006, 12:17pm EST

ever notice how the best work grows out of the deepest pain? kind of a disturbing paradox

reply to this comment

Allison R. Nov 26, 2006, 10:30am EST

I agree with Michelle, some of the best things I write are out of those raw emotions. Robin sorry to hear the man you loved walked away and left you feeling sad and blue. Try the three T's Truth (God); Time; TLC it worked for me.

reply to this comment

Latasha W. Nov 27, 2006, 3:01pm EST

Wow. I pray that God will give you joy to replace your sorrow.

reply to this comment

Satish Dogra Nov 27, 2006, 9:35pm EST

Your wronged love doth touch the heart
Of every sensitive soul
And makes us think what pain must come
From the unachieved goal

May God give you the peace of mind
And him some better sense
That he realise what he has lost
And comes to make amends.

reply to this comment