A Haiku for Ann M. (ImageReader) & You!

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Shaunee C. Mar 31, 2009, 8:10pm EDT

very nice

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Christine G. Mar 31, 2009, 8:30pm EDT

Nice. Thanks for sharing.

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JoAnn C. Mar 31, 2009, 8:35pm EDT

nice one

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Kay M. Mar 31, 2009, 8:36pm EDT

I like it!

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Marianne M. Mar 31, 2009, 9:04pm EDT

"Clown's laugh inverted" ... very nice, Curt!

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Ann M. (Site Scryer) Mar 31, 2009, 9:25pm EDT

Thank you, Curt!

This has the feel of John Walter's poem in which I became a sentient space-parrot surrounded by poet-hijackers. I think my life is becoming a surreal circus.

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carolyn b. Mar 31, 2009, 9:31pm EDT

Nice Curt

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JOHN BECK Mar 31, 2009, 9:34pm EDT

I read this many times. There are so many ways to look at life. This is an interesting twist. Good one, Curt.

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Cristina S. Mar 31, 2009, 9:39pm EDT

Inverted laugh - yawning shadows - life's circus...
All sounds pretty sad to me Curt - are you OK?

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Leora E. Mar 31, 2009, 10:14pm EDT

fading laughter..er..ummmm....dark humor........uh...er.... geez Carl , this is hard.....ummmm.......deadly nightshade, LOL...Okay, okay... I dunno, :)

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Leora E. Mar 31, 2009, 10:17pm EDT

I'm going to get one of these one day, I just know it !!! :?)

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Alison H. Mar 31, 2009, 10:41pm EDT

So appropriate for our master of surrealism!

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Jo N. Mar 31, 2009, 11:05pm EDT

Very nice.

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Kushal Poddar Apr 1, 2009, 7:50am EDT

This is brilliant.

Oh Lord, this world…

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Mariana T. Apr 1, 2009, 1:27pm EDT

Curt, I have to think about this - not being a clown person I find them all sad but I do love some circuses (without animals)...you are a master of words though - thank you. Salud

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lynn a. Apr 1, 2009, 1:32pm EDT

Yep. This feels about right. Cool.

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Marge H. Apr 1, 2009, 7:46pm EDT

Awesome writing Curt.

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Rose H. Apr 1, 2009, 9:28pm EDT

It sounded sad, but you are the master of words for haikus, Curt. Is that even a correct plural - haikus?

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DJ B. Apr 2, 2009, 8:08am EDT

A haiku for a dreary, foggy, blah day like today...

Excellent, as always, Curt. :o)

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Sherrie H. Apr 2, 2009, 2:30pm EDT

Very poignant. Excellent work.

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necee t. Apr 2, 2009, 2:39pm EDT

very great haiku... as always... Bless you my friend... xo

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Jean, just the teensiest bit odd, F. Apr 2, 2009, 9:20pm EDT

Wonderful, Curt... Simply wonderful...

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Patti M. Apr 3, 2009, 9:42pm EDT

Wonderfully written.

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anna vee Apr 4, 2009, 2:39am EDT

Love the colors too.

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Lawrence U. Apr 5, 2009, 12:46am EDT

Well crafted - I like it!

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Nyota *Star* Apr 7, 2009, 4:33pm EDT

we are laughing at ourselves as the curtain draws near

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Wilma M. Apr 7, 2009, 11:57pm EDT

At first, I was going to say it was a fun haiku but then with the clown's laugh inverted, I'm not so sure.

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Wilma M. Apr 8, 2009, 12:08am EDT

Sorry I haven't been around much. I'm going to try getting on Gather for a couple hours every evening (except on the few nights that I go to work!) Not many of those left.

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