by Debbie G.

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July 16, 2006

Arkansas haiku

October 15, 2009 03:03 PM EDT

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Where cloud meets mountain

Grams grey hairnet weights autumn

flattens all color.

Tags: haiku, writing from the heart, nature

To Groups: For the Love of Free Verse, haiku

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Tonia, who hugs trees G. Oct 15, 2009, 3:09pm EDT

I'm guessing it was a misty, foggy drive to the horses. This paints the picture perfectly.

Debbie G. Oct 15, 2009, 7:15pm EDT

Right on the mountain tops, Tonia.

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Wesley W. Oct 15, 2009, 3:34pm EDT

Some pictures do paint a thousand words, but your few words have painted a wonderful picture my friend.

Debbie G. Oct 15, 2009, 7:15pm EDT

Thanks Wes :)

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Ina ♥ Tagline Free Since September '09 ♥ Oct 15, 2009, 3:41pm EDT

Splendid! I love the gray hairnet. So descriptive!

Debbie G. Oct 15, 2009, 7:16pm EDT

Thanks Ina :)

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Oct 15, 2009, 7:42pm EDT

Vivid!

Debbie G. Oct 15, 2009, 8:36pm EDT

Thanks Magi :)

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Tory H. Oct 16, 2009, 9:27am EDT

Ooh, very nice imagery.

Debbie G. Oct 16, 2009, 5:44pm EDT

Thanks Tory :)

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