Life

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Shelbia C. Jul 6, 2008, 4:57pm EDT

I am not too sure about the title.

Ghostly Ghoul Oct 8, 2009, 2:33pm EDT

Sometimes you need to come back in a few weeks/months reread and see if you still like the title. :0)

~3000~

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carol r. Jul 6, 2008, 5:03pm EDT

cool

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Anne W. Jul 6, 2008, 5:07pm EDT

lovely!

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Human, Katherine, seeker of intergalactic life, inhabitant of Earth Jul 6, 2008, 6:36pm EDT

Titles are always hard for me to settle on for my writing. Always the last thing to be written and sometimes can take as long as the writing of the piece!

No matter the title Shelbia...this is an excellent read.

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Bethany C. Jul 6, 2008, 8:43pm EDT

I like it. The title, too. The only thing about one word titles, although I use them, too, is that later you may write something else and really want to name it that, but you'll have to choose a different name.

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Rose H. Jul 10, 2008, 11:34am EDT

Amazing to see some of my own thoughts written down in poem form. I like this one a lot.

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Vinay Benjamin Jul 20, 2008, 12:37pm EDT

I will repeat what Rose said - "Amazing to see some of own thoughts written down . . . particularly the last line of this wonderful poem. Well done, Shelbia

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Jul 21, 2008, 5:58am EDT

Indeed it is so, Shelbia! Excellent!

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Sarah (I want points) Jul 22, 2008, 1:27pm EDT

Well... That's an amazing poem. Very well written and so much truth.

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Spencer T. Jul 23, 2008, 9:45am EDT

Life is a perfect title in that the write reflects so much of what we live. As ususal you write in ways which touch the soul always making me yearn for more.

Good stuff.

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Marsha S. Jul 23, 2008, 11:34am EDT

nicely done

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Barbara B. Jul 23, 2008, 9:54pm EDT

Shelbia, such a lovely poem young lady. 'Life' makes a great title for this
because all through the poem is 'Life'. simply fantastic! *smiles*

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Barbara B. Jul 23, 2008, 9:56pm EDT

Shelbia I tried to get to those poems about Sunday but could not.

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Elsie Duggan Jul 25, 2008, 12:58am EDT

Beautiful poem Shelbia, and yes, it is about life, and life is all about time, and how it flies, and zip, it is gone so fast.

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