waited my whole life

I have waited

my whole life

to feel this way.

Dreamed about you

long ago.

I have imagined

my life with you.

A fantasy that

has come true.

I can't believe

I am here with you.

When I look

in your eyes.

the truths I see

are a part of me.

I know this time

the vision is real.

Comments: 26

Corina Carrasco Jul 25, 2007, 10:05pm EDT

great job, Sue...I'm still waiting!

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michelle K. Jul 25, 2007, 10:08pm EDT

That's a great poem of love! So romantic!!!

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Apryl Just Apryl Jul 25, 2007, 10:10pm EDT

I felt this way on my Wedding Day way back in December, lol. Really this is beautiful and I still feel this way about my husband.

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Terry S. Jul 25, 2007, 10:22pm EDT

So happy for you - Lucky guy, lucky girl

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Janet "Jax" B. Jul 25, 2007, 10:23pm EDT

very sweet...

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Sue D. Jul 25, 2007, 10:29pm EDT

I am glad I was convincing, because it is just still a fantasy. *sigh*

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Claudia B. Jul 25, 2007, 10:36pm EDT

Keep the faith, he's coming..mine showed up five years ago when I was 47! It was well worth the wait but I did a lot of soul searching to determine what I wanted and God responded with even more attributes that are so wonderful. Okay, so he doesn't have the long hair that I envisioned, in fact, he's bald but who cares?

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Jenn G. Jul 25, 2007, 10:39pm EDT

great poem, very heartfelt.

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Cheryl W. Jul 25, 2007, 11:26pm EDT

It is a very nice feeling to feel this way...good one!

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Sheila Deeth Jul 26, 2007, 1:26am EDT

Fantasy is good - keeps us mindful of what can be. Lovely poem.

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andrew c. Jul 26, 2007, 2:03am EDT

sweet

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Sue D. Jul 26, 2007, 2:18am EDT

Alright Claudia, I won't give up hope!

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Jill~Sexy Back~ V. Jul 26, 2007, 5:37pm EDT

beautiful poem. it seems to have come straight from your heart. Thanks for sharing

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Elsie Duggan Jul 27, 2007, 1:29am EDT

I love this Sue and I wish it to be true for you with all my heart.

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WoW
So this was just a dress rehearsal ...
... can't wait to read the one when the curtain does go up!

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Sue D. Jul 27, 2007, 12:17pm EDT

Elsie, I can't give up hope. Thank you for your wishes. The power of positive thought makes dreams come true!

Thanks Mr. Bill.

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It's Not Me w. Jul 27, 2007, 5:07pm EDT

A dream come true... that is just wonderful Sue. I love it.

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James Ball Jul 27, 2007, 8:55pm EDT

Very beautiful Sue, I am touched again!!!

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Robi Y. Jul 28, 2007, 2:01pm EDT

I believe every person should feel this way with their partner! I wish you happiness and most of all to find that heart connected to yours for all your life. I will not tell you how old I was before my beloved walked in.. I wish you well

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