Distrust

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Clare Stella Aug 17, 2006, 4:47pm EDT

battered woman syndrome.

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Julius K. Aug 17, 2006, 5:19pm EDT

Lack of trust breeds doubt, if you don't trust him, the path ahead will not be fruitful.

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Linda Douglas Aug 17, 2006, 6:48pm EDT

The words will eventually erode the love down to nothing. Been there. Great poem.

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Kevin Linagen Aug 17, 2006, 7:37pm EDT

Wow! Another terse rendering of your deepest feelings. Thanks for sharing your sensitivity.

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Cheryl W. Aug 17, 2006, 8:55pm EDT

Deep and powerful.....

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Carol Roach Aug 17, 2006, 10:21pm EDT

great poem, if you distrust him it is time hard as it might be to let him go.

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Laurie O. Aug 17, 2006, 10:24pm EDT

Why, may I ask, would you feel so "empty" by one man's words. Is he really worth giving him THAT much power? Are you not worth more? I say you are. I hope someday, you will see you are.

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Carol Cassell Aug 17, 2006, 10:52pm EDT

Carol, how true. Been there done that. I have quite an arsenal of emotions to write from.

Thanks Clare, Julius et al for your concern.

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Maura Alia Badji Aug 18, 2006, 5:39am EDT

words can sometimes do more damage than physical blows...take heed.

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Carol Cassell Aug 18, 2006, 7:20am EDT

How true!

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