by Jann L.
Member since:
January 20, 2007

A Second Short Poem

August 04, 2007 04:15 PM EDT (Updated: August 09, 2007 03:41 PM EDT)
views: 46 | comments: 15

 

Leaves rustling in breeze,

Clouds scudding in azure sea.

Heatwave has broken.

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Comments: 15

Carmen C. Aug 4, 2007, 4:25pm EDT
Nice poetry.
Kim A. Aug 4, 2007, 4:31pm EDT
neat
I do believe they call that a HAIKU - Nice job...!
Margy O. Aug 4, 2007, 4:49pm EDT
Very nice. I wish our heat wave would do that.
Suzi :Two sides to every story Aug 4, 2007, 4:56pm EDT
Really good. I like it.
Brian A. Aug 4, 2007, 6:43pm EDT
your short poems are good. I wish the heat wave would break here!!!!
Karen W. Aug 4, 2007, 9:19pm EDT
I LOVE when the heat waves break. Nice short piece.
Carol Roach Aug 5, 2007, 11:40pm EDT
nice, and great thought, heatwave has broken
Jann L. Aug 6, 2007, 11:15am EDT
Thanks, my Friends. :-)

Carol, weren't the last two days marvellous after all that heat? That thunderstorm this morning was a real doozy, though, wasn't it?
Marie L. Aug 9, 2007, 12:41pm EDT
My favorite actually :-)
elizabeth e. Aug 15, 2007, 12:12am EDT
thank God...hate heat waves!
Heidi M. Aug 15, 2007, 5:32pm EDT
Nice!
Henry R. Aug 30, 2007, 8:02pm EDT
Thank you for sharing
Shelbia C. Jan 22, 2009, 6:40pm EST
great poem
Dawn (fly on the wall) Jul 11, 2009, 2:46am EDT

I love the sounds of nature. It's invigorating for the soul. Alas, don't like heatwaves. Peace.

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