On the lap of hope,
We all see dreams to find our queen of heart
who may be loving, caring and good at heart,
She may be beautiful and smart.
Some of us begin to search her,
without tiring and caring of rest.
We wait a lot and keep patience too much.
One day, we meet to our search.
We begin to like her.
We find her image here and there.
We make promises and swear.
We forget our self and think about only her.
We feel like love in our heart.
We dream to make her our life’s part.
We think she is another wheel of cart.
And one day we propose to our sweet heart.
She does deny,
because she is in love of another guy.
The breaking of heart makes a noise,
why? Why and why?
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Sadly tis true.
THE STORY INSPIRES ME TO WRITE LIKE THIS.
I ALWAYS WRITE WHATEVER HAPPENS WITH ME AND WHAT I FEEL.
ANY WAY THANKS TO YOU ALL
THANKS JANNET B
THANKS LORI
THANKS DANILIE
THANKS CINDI
THANKS LOYD
THANKS BHAWANA. I WILL TELL YOU PERSONALLY.
THANKS SIGRIET
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The heart is the strongest organ that can be broken so easily.
Namaste, Wayne
The ladies are right,... it's true not all are like this, the species would have never civilized at ALL
... the ones that say "yes" and mean "no" are.... well, Wayne's quote about the heart is very apt.
Peace.
Still, I agree with the sentiment expressed in the poem. Women never gave a sh*t for me and this is why I can sympathize with the grief shown here. That's just the way it is some times.
I ALWAYS WRITE WHATEVER HAPPENS WITH ME AND WHAT I FEEL.
ANY WAY THANKS TO YOU ALL"
there is a word for that.. it is GUTS.
a problem we've all had from time to time, i wouldn't doubt
a classical cliche'd story, yet with meaning , ,10 for the effort :)
"Nice May finish Last - But Not With Me"
and you give it a new twist:
"The breaking of heart makes a noise,
why? Why and why?"
Yes, that's it.
I must check out something first.
The Heart Girl
waiting for someone to lift it up; but the one you wanted to
do so was already lifted by another! I am so sorry that has not
brought you pleasure, only heartache; this is what I gleaned;
what I felt from your writing Raj. The Heart Girl (((Hugs)))
so don't worry about me. i'm already have the treasure of love what i hoped.
Although according to my set rules for my group"C" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "C" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "O" Not "C", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "C".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.
Although according to my set rules for my group " "E" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "E" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "O" Not "E", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "E".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.
Although according to my set rules for my group"D" ~ Articles/Images That Start with the letter "D" (All subjects matter allowed...)" I have had to reject it.
In your case your article starts with the letter "O" Not "D", and like the rules say for this group the title must start with a "D".
I am also sorry for the delay of finally letting you know if it would be accepted or denied. I have finally got back to Gather after some time away. And I am trying my hardest to get through all my groups and the submitted pieces. I will be busy for at least a week if not longer.
Sorry once again for the delay.
about you..hoping you will never be heartbroken. *smiles*
Hugs n Love,
Barbie
Like the over worn blankie that some carry throughout their childhood
Still comfort us
with a familiar beating of hope
within the tapastry of heart strings
woven in in its repair
lou anne