March
Inverse
Now March is here the trees stretch out their limbs
To feel the roaring air and warming sun
And riffle through their wardrobes once again
*
The snow has melted and the swollen streams
Are demob happy: freed from crystal bonds
They roar with manic laughter, chuckling sounds
*
Sweet violets and lesser celandines
Compete like catwalk models to impress
And set the season's color with their dress
*
In ponds male frogs cling grimly to their mate
Determined each that he should be the one
Establishing succession to the throne
*
While songbirds trill, the nimbly feeding swift
Flits like a fighter picking off its foe
By air-ace flown in dog-fights long ago ~
Obverse
~ Now March is here the couples in the park
Vow faithfulness and constancy like swans
As cobs monogamously court their pens
*
Young children cast keyboards and screens aside
And burst from heated rooms to run outdoors
Like frantic puppy-dogs or mad March hares
*
Impatient gardeners clean and oil their tools
Their winter hibernation at an end
They venture out to prune braving the wind
*
Accountants study columns and compute
How little tax their clients need to pay
As magpies wait to steal their eggs away
*
Like hawks the farmers monitor their fields
For signs of life, the miracle of birth,
For fresh green shoots arising from the earth


Comments: 23
A few trifling suggestions. Demob in S2L2 I had to look up, then it made wonderful sense. Might deserve an asterisk, as would cobs. S5L1 really needs a comma after trill, for me, and Obverse S5L2 would look less daunting with just commas for the colon/semicolon pair.
A real delight, sir.
Wade, glad it invoked England for you. Imagine how I felt leaving out the U from color!
John, I have immediately taken your advice and adjusted the punctuation. For any other readers 'Demob happy' is still a fairly common expression in Britain, referring to how skittish soldiers would become as their demobilisation drew close. And a cob is a male swan, a pen a female swan.
Leave the U's in. I put them in just to aggravate the snobs, well, not as much as my girlfriend, but when I'm remember I do. Then again, some really get serious about their poetry and I can understand that. It's cathartic and actually fun for me. If whomever reads your work can't adapt or understand to an outside culture then they must be in the wrong place. Your poetry is brilliant.
Take care
That each stanza really flows into the next to create that sense of Spring, whole and complete, is real word-art.
My fav? having raised 7 teens...Sweet violets and lesser celandines / Compete like catwalk models to impress / And set the season's color with their dress
and the keyboard thrown, really strike me as based in reality.
Excellent, Excellent. I quite simply loved it!
Thank you for this breath of fresh, warm air.
(12 inches of snow last week, it is just now melting...so 'specially grateful.
Blessings on your bloomin' pen!
Wilka
Your first stanza masterfully introduces the rejuvenation one feels at this time of year; and sensorially awakens us to your marvelous array of nature's activity. The counterpart (obverse) to your verse was brilliant, Mike! Wonderful writing!
Wilka