by Nina A
Member since:
June 23, 2007

I Am Blind

August 02, 2007 02:57 PM EDT
views: 75 | comments: 13

I am the earth that pulls everything towards me

I am the waves that wash it all away

I am the wind that blows through the leaves

I am the tree without branches

I am the fruit that feeds

I am the seed without soil

I am the ground fertile

I am the grass overgrown

I am the river

I am the flood after the damn has broken

I am the bull

I am the small sheep in a massive herd that stand in a vast field in the middle of nowhere

I am you

You are me

We are the provocation

We are the thoughts

We are the evil

We are the saint

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Comments: 13

john c. Aug 2, 2007, 2:58pm EDT
I like this a lot
Christopher K. Aug 2, 2007, 4:10pm EDT
not to bad at all : )
Jamie ~grant me the serenity..~ G. Aug 3, 2007, 5:39pm EDT
Very good. :D
J W. Dec 20, 2007, 12:01am EST
good poem
Mc Lovin - Loves to rate. Dec 24, 2007, 3:47pm EST
Thank you for taking the time to share this with us. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas/Holiday season!
I am stopping by as a member of the Comment Speedway, thanks for sharing this with us. It was wonderful! I look forward to seeing more from you.
Rhetta A. Feb 13, 2008, 1:47pm EST
I just stumbled across this on Comment Speedway and it is really excellent!
Sherry W. Apr 23, 2008, 3:28pm EDT
Great shift in the middle... nice.
☆ ƒåitĥ ☆ Apr 23, 2008, 3:55pm EDT
GREAT job on this.
Steve V. Apr 23, 2008, 4:14pm EDT
Great job
Austin Cushing May 3, 2008, 3:04pm EDT
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Shelbia C. Sep 1, 2008, 7:01pm EDT
well done

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