Step One – sign up for email notices of coming events offered by the Canadian Writers’ Union. When you receive your invitation to attend the full day workshop in a city near you, sign up. You’ll want to do this quickly, as space is limited, and all eight workshops offered in the first half of 2007 were completely sold out.
Step Two – show up well rested and ready to learn, to ask questions, and to network with your fellow writers. Business cards with your email address would be an excellent idea: bring some.
The Toronto workshop was held on Tuesday, February 27, 2007 at the Textile Museum of Canada. Participants included published, unpublished, and emerging authors – those are the ones who have had one or two works published, usually with smaller presses, but who haven’t yet met the threshold at which one is able to begin applying for the various government grants which are available to Canadian writers. Where one fit in this continuum was immaterial to the presenters – the prevailing attitude was that each person in attendance was already a writer and would be published.
The presenters included Deborah Windsor, Executive Director of the Canadian Writers’ Union; Merilyn Simonds, author of twelve books including The Convict Lover, which was a finalist for the Governor General’s Award; and Ken McGoogan, award winning author of creative non-fiction novels including Ancient Mariner, a biography of Samuel Hearne. Each of the presenters was personable, well prepared and knowledgeable, and all were available for questions, both formally during the question periods provided, and informally, during well-timed breaks.
Topics addressed during the morning included an overview of the landscape of the publishing, bookselling and grant processes in Canada, the impact of technology such as the Internet and print on demand, and the relationships between publishers, editors and writers. Afternoon sessions focused not on the book, but rather on the writer. A discussion about the ergonomics of writing was followed by an exercise session, during which many photos were taken. This was followed by sessions about building a track record and generating income while waiting for one’s big break, maximizing available tax benefits, and the importance of negotiating reasonable publishing contracts – and of seeking advice before one signs on the dotted line rather than after. The Canadian Writers’ Union is available to assist both members and non-members with this process, but is often not called for advice until the contract has already been signed, and can not be changed.
In addition to the wealth of practical information which was presented during the course of the day, participants were provided with a variety of booklets published by the Writers’ Union. The materials alone were worth the price of admission, which, thanks to a grant provided by the Government of Canada’s Book Publishing Industry Development Program (BPIDP) was only $45. Practical and useful information from people with real experience, a great lunch, and best of all, an opportunity to spend a full day in the company of other aspiring authors and to be regarded as a professional writer: these are the components which ensured the success of the Canadian Writers’ Union workshop “How to Get Published and Survive as an Author.”
First bit of homework I've actually managed to get ~finished~ this week (at least to a complete first draft) .... and I'm still feeling very foggy (and miserable, and less than confident, and..... ) Any feedback, comments, input, whatever....would be much appreciated. The prof its going to is a stickler for making every word, sentence and paragraph count, and for grammar.
Second draft now, thanks to Lydia... not sure I made all the changes you recommended, but its getting better, I think.


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next par I'd take out the "which were" in the first sentence, and put a comma after "book" in the second. the sentence that starts with "sessions" needs breaking up and removal of m-dashes.
first sentence in "in addition" par is awkward--can't quite tell that's another booklet, or where it came from. I think in that last sentence you need an actual price, everyone's more than reasonable is not the same thing.
colon, or semi-colon in that last par/sentence? Long sentences are most effective when there are some short sentences to compare them with. :)
You asked for critique, you got critique...now I just want to find out how to pass as canadian long enough to go to one of these, lol!
thanks for the input.... I'll look at it (although she -- i.e. the prof -- likes em dashes and does not like parenthesis.... so those will stay)
When I was in school I had a teacher who was a bug on grammar. He had us doing a thousand words a week. When we got it back, we were expected to do a grammar correction sheet for things he'd marked, and turn it in the next week with the next essay. If there were problems with it, we would get back the grammar correction sheet with the essay, with things to be corrected marked on it as well, so the next week we'd be turning in a new essay, a grammar correction sheet, and a grammar correction sheet for the grammar correction sheet....you see where this is going?
This is the same teacher who handed out a final exam that the girl sitting next to me looked at and said, "Nothing that long can mean anything."
working on edits in the actual document, and then will throw the new and improved version in here
I also have to do a search of EVERY thing I write and kill all the anyway's
You've read it already, but here's the link in case anyone's interested.
hope someday i manage to find that mood again