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by John Doyle

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December 19, 2005

Heat Wave

August 02, 2006 07:15 AM EDT

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The tree locusts sing

Their serenade to morning

The sun brings more heat

Crushing down on all that is

With no real relief in sight

Tags: cities, reality, environment, poetry

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Sara :-) Aug 2, 2006, 7:29am EDT

Good job!

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Cheryl W. Aug 2, 2006, 8:26am EDT

I can relate. The heat here has been stifling. Good one!

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Jim Ross Aug 2, 2006, 9:41pm EDT

John--Makes you wonder what they're sawing about? I felt the heat prickle as it read your tanka. Nice!

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manoj sanyal Aug 3, 2006, 12:53am EDT

lovely ....

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