THIRTY-SIX YEARS
by Marianne McNamara
We eat in easy silence; homemade chicken soup
golden with egg noodles and crusty French bread.
Pale lamplight outlines his craggy face.
His iron-gray hair is cut military short.
Like a Mount Rushmore head,
his features are angular, almost stern.
He sees that I'm watching,
smiles at me with piercing sweetness,
takes my hand in his own.
Together we're a pair of old worn shoes,
comfortable and complete.
We clink our glasses of dark ruby-purple merlot and
drink to the past we've shared and the future to come.
I'm still beautiful, after all these years,
because he loves me.


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Thirty-Six Years shows a wonderfully mature relationship, time forged and comfortable, but where the elements that made it into what it is today, are wistfully far off, or inaccessible--two people who know they love each other but who only have the trappings of shared years before their eyes. As I read this, I sensed a need to reconnect with those elements so that the specificity of the past with its perceived light, shadow, and passion, can return dimension to the professed love. This poem is a lovely close-up portrait of two grand, successful, people--and an exquisite read.