Wandering in the heaven,
I see everything glowing,
My love is not here,
but I have to cheer,
she is down in the world,
I don't dream about her now,
i can see her below,
she is working to and fro,
here i pray God
to send me back in the world,
to meet her again in the proximity,
ecstasy, sanity, serenity,
everything is here,
but my love is missing here
I cannot call on the God
to send her over here,
I live in the world of souls,
where only death is the ticket,
Long live my love,
you have to see the world,
how I pass without you,
Alas! I know I have to wait.
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It is very deep and in ways hard to grasp what
the meaning is. You know what the meaning is in
your heart and mind, but I do not, I am not in your
heart or your mind. Therefore I am at a loss, what
am I to do. I do want to understand this Shah.
~Barbara~
I would say you read Tinch R., what's said is your answer.
A lover died accidently before he could proclaim his love to her.
So, these are his thoughts after death from heaven.
from the embarassment I caused myself to go
through! I should've been born Dumb Blonde!
Yikes it all was right there!! If it was a snake it
could have jumped up and bit me!! Forgive me
please for my not understanding this.
~Barbara~
You can write too, it is not that simple but, initially, a poem requires some inspiration, get some and lap the keyboard, don't go fast, think about wording and sentences formation, write with a flow. And a beautiful poem is created.
passion and add some skilled touch.
Very deep and provacititve poem, Muhammed. Thank you.
Your advice is a powerful turnkey for me.
I'll write according to your suggestions.
Thanks again.
Yes, soulful and imaginitive Jerri. Thanks a lot
Shah
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