Dawn (Haiku)

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Barbra L. Dec 17, 2006, 11:24am EST

Breanne:
This is a lovely haiku. Very well written. The imagery you've painted with your words paints a handsome picture of nature.

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Breanne I've got sunshine on a cloudy day B. Dec 17, 2006, 12:08pm EST

Barbra, thanks!! I was driving early this morning to pet-sit two great little dogs, and this was the scene as I was returning home! :) Thanks for reading!

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Jonathan S. Dec 17, 2006, 12:16pm EST

Once again, great work Bre. Then again, I never expect anything less out of such an amazing woman!

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Breanne I've got sunshine on a cloudy day B. Dec 17, 2006, 12:34pm EST

Jon, thanks hon...I'm humbled.

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John F Walter Dec 17, 2006, 2:11pm EST

A bewitching short poem, Breanne, that hints with few words at mysterious, primeval splendor. Well done!

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Breanne I've got sunshine on a cloudy day B. Dec 17, 2006, 3:30pm EST

Thanks John. You've absolutely made my day...I have a huge smile, and a thankful heart that you're back on gather.

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Mariana T. Dec 17, 2006, 4:19pm EST

Oh Miz Breanne, you are taking me home again - such wonderful words to fit the feeling...wonderful! Thank you. Salud,

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Breanne I've got sunshine on a cloudy day B. Dec 17, 2006, 4:28pm EST

Salud, Mariana.

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Cheryl W. Dec 17, 2006, 4:33pm EST

This is a beautiful haiku. thanks for sharing.

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Theresa Byer Dec 17, 2006, 7:39pm EST

You captured the Port's eyes, my darlin' daughter. Bless you. Love, light, and blessings~Mama

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