by Terry S.
Member since:
November 10, 2006

Life At The Lake

July 18, 2007 08:29 PM EDT
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Life At The Lake

 

Lightest air
Softest breeze
Gently strokes my face

Sweet notes
Of birds delights
Sung sweetly keeping pace

Water kisses sand
To bathe my feet
And wash away each woe

Warm delight
Rays of sun
Comforting my soul

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Comments: 11

Tab B. Jul 18, 2007, 8:41pm EDT
Ooooh, I am there! (I wish) Your poem certainly describes the relaxing effects of a lake, Terry!
Ron B. Jul 18, 2007, 8:58pm EDT
Your really are at a lake. Wish I was.
marilyn l. Jul 18, 2007, 9:54pm EDT
very nice, so real I can feel everything you speak about!
lynn a. Jul 18, 2007, 11:57pm EDT
Me too. I can just feel it, and it is wonderful. Maybe I'll just close my eyes for a bit and let myself drift where the water rinses my toes. Good poem.
Karolyn Q. Jul 19, 2007, 4:48am EDT
Very nice!
arlene (no shame in my game) w. Jul 19, 2007, 10:40am EDT
Very nice terry.
Beverly P. Jul 19, 2007, 1:34pm EDT
ahhhh... makes me want to go to our cottage on the lake!!!!!!
Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jul 19, 2007, 1:57pm EDT
Terry, this is the perfect poem for a day at the lake. Thanks.
Scott R. Jul 19, 2007, 9:03pm EDT
That was good Terry! ~Scott
Wonderful!

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