Walter's gaze settled on the playing children as he rocked in his porch chair, sipping lemonade. They know nothing of Before, he mused, and wondered if that was a good thing.
Some of the children were splashing in the clear, drink-all-you-want water unaware that 50 years ago this same creek was sterile, brown and frothy, like a stopped up toilet bowl. Not only couldn't you drink the water, some claimed even touching it would be fatal.
The children were playing some species-old game, running toward and then away from each other, laughing and rolling in the waist high green grass, a decade before, a hard, acid impregnated field of pebbles and small dead things.
Walter looked up at the clear blue sky and took a deep breath of spring aroma’d air, both only recently rescued from the last remaining pieces of grit and pollution's stinging molecules.
Yells of challenge and mock threats drew his attention back to the children now waging war from the middle branches of two opposing trees. How quickly those lithe brown bodies had scampered up to their arboreal kingdoms. Quite a contrast from the emaciated, lost-eyed youths of their parents’ generation.
It was remembering these dramatic changes that drew his attention to the top of the hill and the Benefactors — what most people called them. Their eight-foot height was muted by distance, but four tentacles standing in stark silhouette against the sky bore witness to their alien origins.
Walter was here when they arrived.
They came in huge spherical ships, landed and immediately went about their work. Some sort of shield that burned the hell out of anyone or anything that tried to penetrate it protected a mile radius around each spacecraft. Attempts at communication were ignored. Yet, periodically, plans and prototypes of new economic and ecologically clean technologies appeared outside the shield and were happily accepted by the puzzled populace. After a time, the Earth's older, more damaging technologies, simply ceased to function. Those who hadn't replaced the old with the new were then forced to.
Sensing the alien’s overwhelming power, and with no indication of ill will, politicians began to adapt. They passed laws that supported the environment and more marvels appeared at the edge. They passed laws about Responsible Ecological Behavior, initiated awareness programs in the schools, and more wonders appeared—technologies to help in the clean-up, to help humans better understand both their planet and their bodies and what is needed to grow and maintain each.
Once the Earth and the people were again healthy and vibrant came what became known only as The Call. No one was quite sure how it happened, how they knew, but over two years every person between the ages of 20 and 40 voluntarily entered newly arrived spaceships and departed Earth.
Walter was in his fifties, so he stayed and watched as each year a new crop of twenty year olds left on the spaceships. Everyone understood they were on a mission of great importance to the Universe and would return after a time. If asked, people would say the aliens explained all this but no one could remember communicating with them. The only people who pondered this at all were the few very old people, like Walter, who remembered The Before.
It had been 30 years since the first departure and, to Walter's knowledge, no one had ever returned.
Thinking about all this — the Before, the Benefactors, the Call — always tired Walter. As his eyes slowly closed, his head dropped toward his left shoulder. Catching a last glimpse of the children, a sardonic smile visited his face and a tear trickled its way down his cheek. He was remembering what his mother used to say to him.
If you don't clean up your room, I'll do it for you and send you the bill.
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Comments: 52
John, sorry for the curve ball.
Pat, must be some of that free, good-for-you alien technology. Hey, what do you want for 500 words?
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I'm blushing, Arlene. Glad you liked it.
Please read and rate my entry:
A Scandalous Overture
But tell me one thing--the aliens aren't eating all those 20 year olds, are they? I hate it when that happens.
Thanks again for your interesting article.
10*
God bless
I very much like Gina comments.
Gina, yes I'm sure teenagers would step up to the task "It's a dirty job but somebody's ..." and all that.
No, they aren't eating them, though there was a famous science fiction story and a Twilight episode where that happened called something like "serving humans/mankind" (except this was serving in the context of a menu."
I think it's the alien version of "carbon offset."
The bill is always more than you expected it to be...
Safe Sex and Home Repair - Chapter 2
But, back to your point...interesting.
Only one entry in the Phantasmagoria contest, John.
Loved it, and very well done in 500 words.
Jackie F.
She Drives Me Crazy
You're welcome, Dale. Thanks for Bear Country.
And we think we have a problem, Jackie.
Thanks, Patry. Appreciate it.
I thought they were slaves on another planet, John.
This is a lot of story in so few words. Very twilight zone-ish, and I mean that as high praise.
J.K That is the title I was trying to think of. Thanks. "I thought they were slaves on another planet." Not sure whom you meant. My characters or the "Serve Man" guys?
But i have a question...John, I know you are a humor writer, who sometimes writes serious articles, but have you had fiction published....you have an excellent feel for writing fiction in that cinematic style that is so important...
And i love your little zingers at the end of your articles. I always feel like...wait for it...wait....here it comes...then sure enough...what we least expect is what you are going to give us!
Thanks for this!
Bon
(I used to watch a LOT of Twilight Zone and Outer Limits when I wuz a kid... But, then, you probably already guessed that much... ;o) )
Bonnie, thanks for the kind words.
Feel I'm just learning the craft so I haven't submitted any fiction for publication. About ready to though.
Jean, me too. There are a lot of us warpos out there.
One question about this line:
"After a time, the Earth's older, more damaging technologies, simply ceased to function."
Do you think they will come to my house and do away with my Windows Vista and give me something better?
"It's the year 2022... People are still the same. They'll do anything to get what they need. And they need SOYLENT GREEN."
Judi and Gina, I think you need to talk to J.K. She's got a great cookbook for you. (I've used it for years and love it. Yum.) Come to think of it, why don't you just come to my house? I'd love to have you for dinner.
John, I meant: I thought that in your story the aliens were shipping all the able-bodied adults away to work the salt mines of their home planet. In "to serve man" they were heading off to the processing plant to become cream of human condensed soup.
J.K. "cream of human condensed soup" -LMAO. Well, not sure it was to work in the salt mines. Maybe doing ecological good until they'd paid their debt would be a more benign karma.
Nancy O, you got it. I'll accept modern fable if you insist (please do!)