by *Holly *.
Member since:
December 30, 2007

Patter

March 01, 2008 01:16 AM EST (Updated: March 01, 2008 01:17 AM EST)
views: 27 | comments: 13
The daybreak
Peeking up
Again today
Like always
Even when I don't want it to
My inner glow
Swimming around my room
Radiating
From wall to wall
Hiding from corner to corner
Pitter patter of little feet
Tapping beautifully on my wooden floors
Dashing in
Bringing my light
Cuddling under the covers
Fetching love
In every single breath
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Comments: 13

J W. Mar 1, 2008, 2:03am EST
good poem
Kushal Poddar Mar 1, 2008, 3:05am EST
My inner glow
Swimming around my room_ you have made to stir my inner eye. a great poem
John Philipp Mar 1, 2008, 8:23am EST
I enjoyede reading this, Holly. Thanks.
Curt L. Mar 1, 2008, 11:20am EST
Superb, Holly! Thank you!
Very very nicely done.
Zara Stevens Mar 1, 2008, 9:56pm EST
That's just gorgeous - well done :)
AiLing K. Mar 2, 2008, 1:20am EST
Awesome Poem, Holly!
Lucky Stars Mar 2, 2008, 10:40am EST
I really enjoy your poetry, Holly.
Very nice!
Jerri H. Mar 2, 2008, 7:04pm EST
Such poignant work you do...thanks Holly
Al h. Mar 2, 2008, 7:14pm EST
ten! for sure!
Deborah O. Mar 4, 2008, 11:50am EST
very nicely done

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