by Steven A.
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June 29, 2006

Heats of passion

December 31, 2006 04:17 PM EST
views: 74 | comments: 24

Sitting by a crackling fire

parked so close

flames nip at our feet

Our eyes meet

dabs of sweat emerge

Heats of passion overtake the fire

warming of our hearts ensue

Collision of our souls

sparks an eternal flame

We become one

 

 

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Comments: 24

Terry S. Dec 31, 2006, 5:45pm EST
Whoa! Intense
Jennifer A. Dec 31, 2006, 6:02pm EST
that's sexy
Cheryl W. Dec 31, 2006, 6:26pm EST
beautiful...
♥kyra D. Dec 31, 2006, 6:33pm EST
Very nice!
Carolion Grailbear Dec 31, 2006, 6:36pm EST
Now - lol - what will you cook up with your flame?
Michael Platt Dec 31, 2006, 7:09pm EST
Sounds like a most enjoyable romantic evening! The kind of fire that burns in your pleasure! Well conveyed!
Carol Roach Dec 31, 2006, 8:27pm EST
passionate, but I would be worried about my hot toes
Polly J. Dec 31, 2006, 8:31pm EST
Now thats hot...I like it
Heidi B. Dec 31, 2006, 8:58pm EST
Wow a 10 for excellent descriptoin of true love and intimacy.
Elaine K. Dec 31, 2006, 9:25pm EST
Wow! I need a cigarette.
Marlena J. Dec 31, 2006, 9:55pm EST
Flames of passion!

nice.
Shawn "left this place" W Dec 31, 2006, 10:13pm EST
Very nice!
deZengo m Dec 31, 2006, 11:37pm EST
I enjoyed the memory of my own fireplace experience that your poem reignited. If you ever get the chance, take a camera explore and capture the passionate beauty that the fire unlocks. It really is amazing to watch. I appreciate your look into fire.
Laura H. Jan 1, 2007, 12:11am EST
How romantic!
carolyn t. Jan 1, 2007, 1:16am EST
Nice, warm and steamy. Very well written. The imagery is excellent. Keep writing!!
Quinn (aka Entwife) Blackburn Jan 1, 2007, 1:34am EST
"Collision of souls"... I like that! Sometimes, that is Just how it feels!

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Shruthi P. Jan 1, 2007, 1:46am EST
Great poem!!!
Love the intensity... And tat complete total abandon that you've expressed!!!
Leanarda S. Jan 1, 2007, 1:50am EST
Captures an exciting, passionate time beautifully!

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Amitabh Mitra Jan 1, 2007, 2:02am EST
Enjoyed reading your poem

Amitabh
Terry Collett Jan 1, 2007, 2:54am EST
Nice poem.
Lalitha B. Jan 1, 2007, 3:38am EST
Romantic to the core.
Olga Krylova Jan 1, 2007, 4:44am EST
What a poet! How touching! So much passion and love in ten lines only!
Instincts, reactions and thoughts intertwine!
Cortney R. Jan 1, 2007, 3:03pm EST
those were very beautiful and passionate words.

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