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by Minakshi w.
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November 13, 2006

Autumn has tip toed in.....

September 24, 2007 03:31 AM EDT (Updated: December 05, 2007 04:36 AM EST)
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Folks, this was entirely Kathryn's idea . She suggested we do a combined article on AUTUMN, sharing thoughts and impressions from our different perspectives.

Here it is.

She wrote the poem while I wrote the prose poem...she definitely had me inspired with her encouraging words.

 

 

 

 The Saga of the Soft, Green Leaf 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hold this leaf, this soft green leaf, touch it to my cheek,
and I hear the Celtic flute's wail, my people's stormy steerage,
who walked the Rockies, eating wildflowers, privations of ice and death ,
which echoes the saga of the soft, green leaf;

I hold this leaf, this soft, green leaf, not yet bitten by loss of chlorophyll that brings Autumn's bright beauty, vile harbinger of death to come,
where brilliance fades to browned crimson, crumpled carcasses that blow like tumbleweeds, echoing privations of ancestors past;


I hold this leaf, this soft, green leaf, touch it to my cheek,
but I know its future holds bitter ice and death;
I yearn to know this soft green leaf will survive the crystalline ice that wraps its deathly arms around the stem, laughing, while it chokes the bud,

I yearn to see a new green bud on this very stem, its presence the ancestral smiles of sepia photos that return life in new birth, squealing, new pink birth, triumph, joy over death.  

 

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Autumn has stepped in, tip toeing on golden star steps.


Autumn

Golden letters and half-hearted sad endings to spring's ruse....no pinks or purples now, nor the iridiscent glow of silver on winter-left lives. Here come the breaths of a dragon, perhaps. Or the sighs of a poet...or a lover's pain. Warm words flavored with hand knitted sweaters   will slip September into November. Soon, it will be winter.

 

In Kashmir, barely-able-to-breathe-without-sending-gold-tripping-down-Chinars will soon find poets, painters, tourists, the locals and the exiled dreaming of warm fires in the home and the scent of crushed leaves. There will be fires in the sky and on the ground...letters from the Gods, soft songs caught in the trees singing, 'come again.'
Windows will soon find children with their noses pressed to the glass, writing their names and smiley faces on the condenation. 

In Srinagar, boats gliding out will meet misty chills that have left streaking silver trails on the lakes. Ladies the age my grandmother was when I was ten will tie sliced turnips, tomatoes, apples and herbs into garlands to dry in sunny windows. Preparations for the winter when gray skies and moody days will walk in the door. 

 

New Delhi will soon become a city of yellowing leaves drifting on an October air .Festivals, parties,marriages will come tripping through the letter box. Pickles and Diwali will string smiles on this busy road to winter. Lights and flavors of autumn....flights and savours of autumn....! Diyas will dance soon enough, as trunks open to reveal last year's love-affair with words, pressed and forgotten--in old journals and dry leaves.

 

Here in Bombay, the sea surges gray and mysterious, leaping into thought cameras. Trees don't change color here....if they do, it's rare. Only the rains come and go...
Drops the size an eye cannot measure, tiny beads and huge, thick pearls come carried on the dancing wings of winds. Rooms with open doors and windows wait for a stray golden message to float in...it may it may not..! No blankets, no crunching leaves in lone walks . No warm pockets nor fingers fiddling with nuts..none of this.

Only the rain...that walks tall, miles tall over the sea. Falling in silvery ropes that tie up flighty thoughts into sounds and words. Sounds that catch the non-autumn in songs and sighs and smiles. Sounds of a drunken rain......an autumn rain.

 

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Comments: 133

Svetlana Goryacheva Sep 24, 2007, 3:35am EDT
You have managed to convey the feeling perfectly - bravo, dear Minnie! ;-)

Love and blessings - S.
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J W. Sep 24, 2007, 4:19am EDT
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Kathryn E. Sep 24, 2007, 4:31am EDT
HI Minnie, wow, the photos you have chosen are stunning.

I absolutely adore your prose poem, minnie, about autumn in Kashmir, New Delhi and Bombay. You are such a gifted writer; your poem makes me want to visit India.
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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Sep 24, 2007, 4:57am EDT
Minnie, both works are excellent .... the complement each other and they contrast each other - and the experience and the meaning of autumn are rich, indeed! Both deserve to be in a poetry anthology. I wish I could give this more than 10 stars!
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Minakshi w. Sep 24, 2007, 5:06am EDT
Thank you, Kathryn, for sharing and for encouraging me to do this with you!
I just had to find images to go with your "soft green leaf"
I found your own poem so moving...touching gentle autumn leaves and going deep into one's ancestry....and a hope for renewal of nature's glory.
You liked the images---so glad :)
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Minakshi w. Sep 24, 2007, 5:09am EDT
Magi, your words are enough....more than enough!
Poetry anthology? :) Well....!! Thank you! To Kathryn also....for creating this idea and doing it with me...
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Vinay Benjamin Sep 24, 2007, 5:34am EDT
This is a great idea Minnie - I enjoyed your and Kathryn's work. Having writing partners on Gather can be lots of fun - one thought, different perspectives.
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Lawrence U. Sep 24, 2007, 5:43am EDT
A good poem and an interesting reflection on autumn. Well done!
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Fred Hose Sep 24, 2007, 5:48am EDT
Well done Minnie and Kathryn
I loved this merging of cultures. Two different worlds but with the same rich evocative
imagery. The combination of poetry and prose is fascinating.
One has to change gear a little but the Romantic mood remains.
Well done you two artists.
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Pepsie J. Sep 24, 2007, 6:02am EDT
Just beautiful, I look forward to future projects. Thanks
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Apryl Just Apryl Sep 24, 2007, 6:25am EDT
beautiful~
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elizabeth e. Sep 24, 2007, 7:19am EDT
Just exquisite minnie...your gifts overflowed the Ganges in this one.
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Shruthi P. Sep 24, 2007, 7:37am EDT
Kathryn's poem is beautiful, that continued refrain about the green leaf really added to the poem, I like the images you've invoked and how you've spoken about your ancestors, I like the feel of forever one gets from your words... lovely writing...

Minnie, now this picture you've painted about Autumn I can understand, after all it is apan ka desh! and I miss Delhi now.. I do, all the flowers that sprung up on campus and how we drank hot horlicks to stay warm and how all of us girls huddled under one quilt to watch "chashme baddoor" and share stories of a million things, how my mothers parcel of banana bread arrived... lots of memories from Delhi... and in Chennai the leaves don't change colour, but it rains in November... lovely poem Minnie...
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Susan *. Sep 24, 2007, 7:38am EDT
wonderful Minnie....absolutely wonderful! You made me smile before 7 am and that is ALWAYS a good part of a Monday! :-D
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Umar, Abu Nurain Sep 24, 2007, 9:34am EDT
Such a great collaboration. Very inspiring. Thanks to you both for an excellent job!
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Duckie 1 Sep 24, 2007, 9:34am EDT
Wonderful images as colorful as the leaves of Autumn. Well done Minnie and Kathryn!
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Minakshi w. Sep 24, 2007, 9:59am EDT
Thank you, each and every one of you.... I hope many more of you will take the same route and give us some interesting articles written / photographed in tandem.
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JoAnne D. Sep 24, 2007, 10:05am EDT
The picture set this off beautifully, thanks for the share.
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Faith H. Sep 24, 2007, 12:24pm EDT
This was a delightful collaboration, and both pieces are evocative in their individual histories of autumn. Excellent!
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Kathryn E. Sep 24, 2007, 4:54pm EDT
thank you, each and every one of you...it was so much fun to do...

I simply love Minnie's poem...
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Larry H. Sep 24, 2007, 5:07pm EDT
thanks for sharing your poem...
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Lorri Goddard-Clark Sep 24, 2007, 5:10pm EDT
it is a truly beautiful autumn spell.it evokes such imagery in my mind!
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Elizabeth Madrigal Sep 24, 2007, 5:11pm EDT
Can I breathlessly say, 10+10+10? Exquisite.
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Lisa Frost Sep 24, 2007, 5:12pm EDT
these are so wonderful! Great talent and a great combination.
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Arlene H. Sep 24, 2007, 5:12pm EDT
this was a pleasure to read -- all the sights and sounds, colors, images, everything. thank you!
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Marge H. Sep 24, 2007, 5:14pm EDT
What a beautiful idea to bring two cultures and two amazing writers together! I loved the imagery of both of these poems.
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Granny Janny H. Sep 24, 2007, 5:21pm EDT
Magnificent collaboration filled with imagery enough to paint a tapestry of diverse autumn colors and flavors ~ Congratulations my talented friends!
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June b. Sep 24, 2007, 5:25pm EDT
Such talent, and the pictures are beautiful
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Pamela G. Sep 24, 2007, 5:25pm EDT
Absolutley Fabulous!!!!
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Nancy S. Sep 24, 2007, 5:30pm EDT
Wonderful. I enjoyed this combination so much.
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Vivian P. Sep 24, 2007, 5:34pm EDT
both poems are wonderful I truly enjoyed both
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Kevin E. Sep 24, 2007, 5:36pm EDT
Well done!! Talk about comparison and contrast.
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Nana to Seven Cutiepies Sep 24, 2007, 5:40pm EDT
This is wonderful. I really like this collaboration and hope to see more.
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Susan Roberts Sep 24, 2007, 5:42pm EDT
GREAT JOB!! 10 from me
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ann c. Sep 24, 2007, 5:45pm EDT
Very enjoyable, looking forward to more from you two.
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penni d. Sep 24, 2007, 5:45pm EDT
we are no longer "worlds apart" as a united people, when THIS can be done
as you two did it..kudos
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Robert C D. Sep 24, 2007, 5:49pm EDT
very nice....
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Antoine D. Sep 24, 2007, 5:55pm EDT
Beautiful expression of my favorite time of year, thoughtfully evoking differing perceptions of a similar experience. Time to pull out the sweaters.
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Robert - just a simple man - B. Sep 24, 2007, 5:59pm EDT
Sweet Duo Effort. Very well-done and the imagery hits home. I am from New England and if there's one thing I know is the colors of autumn.

In northern New England, however, autumn doesn't tip toe. You go to bed one evening at the end of summer and you wake in the morning to a dazzling display of color. We like to call it indian summer.
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Jo C. Sep 24, 2007, 6:00pm EDT
A successful and very evocative piece indeed, lovely marriage of photos and prose. You've clearly touched a chord, being number 2 in the top rated articles right now. I'm definitely adding my 10 to the vote!
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Jerri H. Sep 24, 2007, 6:07pm EDT
Beautiful!!!
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Denise B. Sep 24, 2007, 6:10pm EDT
wonderful. what is Diwali?
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Anne B. Grote Sep 24, 2007, 6:13pm EDT
inspirational and seasonal!
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jackie s. Sep 24, 2007, 6:46pm EDT
Inspiring
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Susan N. Sep 24, 2007, 7:05pm EDT
Interesting how autumn is viewed from either side of the world - so similar in sentiment yet so different culturally.

A good collaboration, fine work Kathryn and Minnie


Thanks...S
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Angela P. Sep 24, 2007, 7:08pm EDT
Great, another Autumn/Fall post. Okay, so I'm jealous, I'll admit that. (Sigh) Your post
is awesome, by the way.
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Jay M. Sep 24, 2007, 7:08pm EDT
Excellent...I never really got into leaves that much except for when I was raking, or maybe saw the Autumn colors. I might be able to squeeze out one or two words, and that would be it. You two described it beautifully. A big 10 here!
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Sue * Sep 24, 2007, 7:21pm EDT
This was wonderful...musical, I really enjoyed all of its parts!
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Marie J. R. Sep 24, 2007, 7:28pm EDT
one can almost feel that softness,,,this is so wonderful to you both,,, beautiful,,,Thank you
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Lawrence J, H. Sep 24, 2007, 7:33pm EDT
you two make a good team
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Robert D. Sep 24, 2007, 7:37pm EDT
Wonderful works, both of you. The contrast between the different views of autumn, both cultural and geographic are at times stark, at others muted, like viewing a golden tree reflected in a rippled lake. I'm ready for the seasons to change now, thanks to y'all. If only today's non-autumn rain would blow out of Mississippi and bring in a Rocky Mountain cold front!
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Neal Wass Sep 24, 2007, 7:37pm EDT
Thumbs up to both of you. Soft green leaf ,touch it to my cheek ,eating wildflowers, star steps, rain that walks tall. I will never think of Fall the same way again.
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Kathryn E. Sep 24, 2007, 7:37pm EDT
It is so amazing to me to read these two again and to look at the beautiful photos and images Minnie has placed with them - it really brings them alive....I think this is even better than I had imagined....When I had suggested it to Minniie, I had just read one of her articles and then a few days ago, I read her feature in Gather Essentials: Writing and I was so entranced by her writing - I thought it would be so wonderful and unique to have our two POVs represented by fall imagery....
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Kathryn E. Sep 24, 2007, 7:39pm EDT
Minnie's is exquisite, simply exquisite.
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blaine d. Sep 24, 2007, 7:42pm EDT
10++++
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Aunt Boni H. Sep 24, 2007, 7:46pm EDT
Gold Star! Very, very lovely.
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Kathryn E. Sep 24, 2007, 7:47pm EDT
I had no idea what to write - I looked outside and saw only green leaves, not the beautiful brightly colored leaves I so love during autumn. Don't we all love them.

We took a drive on Saturday for several hours, stopping in stores and such. At one store, I stopped at a carousel of CDs you can listen to before you buy...I clicked on a Celtic CD because sometimes I really enjoy Celtic music...At once, I heard the plaintive wail and the image of my ancestors on the ship and then walking across the country eating wildflowers with many dying along the way reminded me of nature's journey for all of us - many begin but few survive...I thought of the one leaf I held in my hand and knew that even its tiny bud might not make spring...
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Sheila Deeth Sep 24, 2007, 7:56pm EDT
Lovely. What's that phrase - compare and contrast. You've combined and contrasted and it works really well.
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Karyn K. Sep 24, 2007, 8:23pm EDT
Wonderful, very descriptive. You both work very good together.
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dee-dee Wishes you the best life has to offer S. Sep 24, 2007, 8:36pm EDT
Minnie, wonderful poem & prose Kathryn
you guys make a wonderful team.
Blessings
Autumn leaves are falling upon my yard, who will pick them up but I.
God Blessings always
10*
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Juan J Martinez Sep 24, 2007, 8:44pm EDT
Great Imigary
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Charlotte Babb Maven-Fairy Godmother Sep 24, 2007, 8:58pm EDT
Wonderful images and travels to far far away places. I am stunned and floating on beauty
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Samara O'Shea Sep 24, 2007, 9:04pm EDT
Life is all about different perspectives. Thank you both for sharing yours with us.
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Dan (Cowboy Up) V. Sep 24, 2007, 9:06pm EDT
Great job! C):-)
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P.W. Dowdy Sep 24, 2007, 9:13pm EDT
That's autumn, ladies. One of my four favorite seasons. Okay, I'm a winter baby, but I love Autumn.
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luckky _. Sep 24, 2007, 9:36pm EDT
Great work!!
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Shaunee C. Sep 24, 2007, 9:39pm EDT
Great poem and pictures great job. I know I am happy it is autumn I love the cool weather.
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Rosalee W. Sep 24, 2007, 10:04pm EDT
Makes me want to go out and rake the leaves....lol...Great poems and talent here!
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Gerry Wass Sep 24, 2007, 10:11pm EDT
I loved the crossing of continents, the swirling of seasons around the world, and the explanation of the forces of music which brought this all together.
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Gigi K. Sep 24, 2007, 10:37pm EDT
What a wonderful idea! Both poems were so vivid - the descriptions were crisp and tangible in my mind and I felt captured by the images. Great job and kudos to the both of you - thanks for sharing!
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Cheryl W. Sep 24, 2007, 10:53pm EDT
This is a beautiful collaboration! Thank you for sharing!
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Shirl T. Sep 24, 2007, 11:42pm EDT
they were so very very beautiful
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Minakshi w. Sep 24, 2007, 11:56pm EDT
Amazing response !!
How can I thank each person who took the time to read and leave their views here!!
A big thank you to all the readers...! Hope you all enjoy this autumn and the one falling in your gardens, back yards, lawns, cities, lakes....! It is a beautiful time of the year and it inspires so much poetry, art, music, visual arts....

Kathryn, your idea has brought so many people together, sharing the drink that is autumn, enjoying the mood it awakens in their own hearts. I had fun doing this article with you! Your soft green-brown leaves and Celtic mood really got to me!Thank you :)
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Trish A. Sep 25, 2007, 12:04am EDT
This is what Gather can be about. The differences yet similarities between the poems from residents of different countries. The idea is powerful and the words live up to the idea.
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Chip Davis Sep 25, 2007, 12:05am EDT
Katherine, your poem is beautiful.

Minnie, your story is wonderful.

What a collaboration!

I gave a 10 and a 10! :-)
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Kathryn E. Sep 25, 2007, 12:09am EDT
This truly is a wonderful thing to see so many people here enjoying thiese two Autumnal odes.
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Nana Gill Sep 25, 2007, 12:17am EDT
Minnie and Kathryn, What a marvelous idea and beautiful poetic prose. Perfect poetry for September and October. I especially love the contrast in The Saga of the Soft Green Leaf. Green, death, and life in new birth. Hats off to the both of you.
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Sophiya S. Sep 25, 2007, 12:23am EDT
lovely
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James s F. Sep 25, 2007, 12:33am EDT
unique
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Tara T. Sep 25, 2007, 2:24am EDT
This is a wonderful colaboration! The images and words are truly magnificent. Thank you both!
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Teresa W. Sep 25, 2007, 2:29am EDT
Lovely work from both of you!!
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Melissa O. Sep 25, 2007, 3:24am EDT
man, I wish I could write poetry like you guys!
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Don N. Sep 25, 2007, 4:47am EDT
Kudos to you both. I love Autumn, I love the beautiful colours that it brings.
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Payam Sudhakaran Sep 25, 2007, 4:56am EDT
Oh Minnie, it's an amazing piece.. Kathryn and you weave magic with words.. My journey up north was only till Delhi.. always wanted to visit kashmir, but somehow coulnd't make it...I remember walking the streets of Tilak Nagar and in front of india gate on a wet winter morning.. it was very foggy... Bombay... yup.. I know it is always sultry... But a drive along the marine beach is what I love to do.. And Eureka! You are in Mumbai... I was in Kolaba... I have a lot of talented friends in Mumbai.. Purba Dutt, Ritu Sur and a lot many...
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Erica M. Sep 25, 2007, 8:27am EDT
Love the use of color
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jessie voigts Sep 25, 2007, 10:09am EDT
gorgeous, both of you!
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arlene (no shame in my game) w. Sep 25, 2007, 10:25am EDT
Nice work.
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Susan B. Sep 25, 2007, 11:17am EDT
superb joining of forces!
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John Harris Beck Sep 25, 2007, 11:27am EDT
Now this is what globalization really is and should be...

Kathryn takes us from Ireland to the Rockies with a leaf to her cheek, Minnie opens autumn to us across India from Kashmir and New Dehli to Bombay, with beautiful photos.

...a great pleasure of this moment of the year.
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Layla Morgan Wilde Sep 25, 2007, 1:17pm EDT
Two odes to Autumn, continents apart yet joined in perfect harmony.
Now I really want to visit India!
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Dave McGill Sep 25, 2007, 1:43pm EDT
Both excellent...I found them very soothing, which is a particularly good thing right now....great composing....thanks
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Granny Janny H. Sep 25, 2007, 2:27pm EDT
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Lucky Stars Sep 25, 2007, 2:48pm EDT
Beautiful words from both of you. Two countries oceans apart - different yet similiar.
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Kathryn E. Sep 25, 2007, 5:09pm EDT
When I read narratives about India, I really want to visit. Minnie's poem is a prime example of beauty in words that makes me want to visit India. Some day. Some day...
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Lauren C. Sep 25, 2007, 5:52pm EDT
Beautiful images -- not only the pictures, but also the ones that were conjured in my brain by your words. :)


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Celeste R. Sep 25, 2007, 7:54pm EDT
I enjoyed the poetry very much--and the description of India in the fall was fantastic--what imagery; unforgettable.
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AMBER L. Sep 25, 2007, 8:02pm EDT
I ENJOYED BOTH POEM'S EQUALLY BUT IN DIFFERENT WAYS THANKS FOR THE GREAT EFFORT AND COLLABORATION..
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amy s. Sep 25, 2007, 9:14pm EDT
good job on the collaboration
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Pat M. Sep 26, 2007, 1:14am EDT
A beautifully eloquent way to look at the same thing through different eyes. Good on you both.
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Minakshi w. Sep 26, 2007, 1:48am EDT
Thank you, all the people who have stopped by to read and comment.