Walter thought I should share this on Gather and told me if I didn't share my venting poem, then he would, so here it is:
When I go shopping and hear a screaming child; I think about your screams good-bye in the car.
When I eat; I think about whether you're being fed.
When I breath, I think about whether you're breathing.
When I shower; I think about you being bathed and clean.
When I use the bathroom; I think about you, whether your diapers are being changed and if you're still screaming and constipated.
When I feel a breeze outside; I think about whether you're warm throughout the day.
When I go to bed, I think about SIDS and whether you will wake up at the foster home.
When I dream; I have nightmares of your removal.
When I cry; I think about you and you only.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm not sure how well it is written. It probably needs more revising and a little more add on's and so forth.
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be positive is the best advise I can give,,,
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem!
I feel all the emotions and turmoil.
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Very heartfelt.
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