A love lost in a singularity

Comments: 34

Carol Lloyd Jan 13, 2007, 3:12pm EST

just wonderful ty

Corina Carrasco Jan 13, 2007, 3:25pm EST

I know the feeling of thinking of someone no matter what I do or think or say, they are always on mind. What a feeling!

You did a very nice job of capturing the emotions of this overwhelming one, true love.

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Carol Roach Jan 13, 2007, 3:28pm EST

very well done

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Cheryl W. Jan 13, 2007, 3:29pm EST

Wonderful. I know the feeling well.

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Stephanie, proud Maw-Maw to my 2 granddaughters, G Jan 13, 2007, 3:39pm EST

great work here, nice smooth read, I been there, done that!

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Vinay Benjamin Jan 13, 2007, 4:23pm EST

Steve - wish I had your pen when you wrote(word processed!) these lines - great write.

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Lynn G. Jan 13, 2007, 4:29pm EST

Captured the feeling and the atmosphere perfectly!

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Larry H. Jan 13, 2007, 4:54pm EST

nicely written,,,thanks for sharing..

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Sandra L. Jan 13, 2007, 4:57pm EST

What a beautiful poem.

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Synchronicity W. Jan 13, 2007, 5:24pm EST

ahhh the mysteries of love...wonderfully penned words!

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Johnny Gregory Jan 13, 2007, 6:25pm EST

Very nice poem. great job.

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Paul B. Jan 13, 2007, 7:59pm EST

I really liked this , Steven. It's simplicity and directness.

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tina stiles Jan 13, 2007, 9:57pm EST

well written. i have been done that road as well.

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Shawn "left this place" W Jan 13, 2007, 10:18pm EST

Wonderful feeling, Great poem!

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Joanna Ammons- F. Jan 14, 2007, 1:12am EST

I kept saying to myself , '" A love lost in singularity", this line was worded particularly nice.

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David Cannon Jan 14, 2007, 7:17am EST

Excellent Steven! I fine piece of poetry!

Dave

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manoj sanyal Jan 14, 2007, 10:56pm EST

lovely .............

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Alexandra E. Jan 15, 2007, 3:38am EST

I don't know the feeling 'love'. Im so unexperienced in the world, so to me, this was like being told what it's like to feel this emotion. I saw this in a different way I think. I liked it though, I understood. :P

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Audrey F. Jan 15, 2007, 10:26am EST

I read your poems several times before I was able to feel into its depths.
It is a poem of many layers. Lovely and so evocative of love.

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zale orcid Jan 15, 2007, 7:33pm EST

very interesting beginning. the message well laid.

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jadan x. Jan 15, 2007, 8:40pm EST

Beautifully written.

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Wurdzgurl !!! Jan 16, 2007, 3:58pm EST

Exquisite!

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Diane H. Jan 18, 2007, 4:06am EST

How delightful. Makes one want to be in love.

Diane

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Libby Rouleau Jan 18, 2007, 2:10pm EST

well done. This took me to another place in time.

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Lynn Doiron Jan 18, 2007, 8:41pm EST

I like your use of repetition and the interesting take/slant offered.

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DARCEY D. Jan 20, 2007, 4:59am EST

Wonderful poem steven,I loved the lines''Am I a mystery to you'' You are a must to me''How may we hope to understand'' The mystery of us'' Lovely poem that captures the essence of love and all the apprehentions that go with it.
Darcey

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Gerry Wass Jan 21, 2007, 11:36am EST

I felt your poem catapult me beyond the mysteries of love to the immense mystery of life itself and how we must struggle with it even though we can never hope to unravel more than little bits of it.

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I. B. Jan 23, 2007, 9:24am EST

and what if we unraveld the mystery? Of life? Of love? what then? Surely the mystery is one huge component of it all. Beautiful poem; wonderfully written, makes the heart catch and... sigh

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