Outside Burgos
in the base camp
after seeing the cathedral
and other sights
and having a beer
and a burger
at the bar
you went to a small disco
and danced a few hours
then went with Mamie
back to the tents
the moon quite bright
like a new coin
on a black cloth
and Mamie said
I can’t remember
where mine is
where what is?
you asked
my tent
my bloody tent
what do you think I meant?
where about were you?
I don’t know
we were only there
half hour or so
she moaned
and it was raining
and I was cold
and the girl
I was sharing with
was one hell of a misery
you could with me
but I’m with that young army guy
she looked at your tent
and said
where is he now?
inside maybe
you said
or out getting plastered
can’t he find
someplace else to sleep?
she said
don’t think he’d do that
some how
you said
well help me find my tent then
she moaned
ok I will
you said
and off you went with her
in the semi dark
walking between tents
trying to discover
her tent
out of so many
wait
she said
after five minutes
I remember we were near
an outhouse
because she moaned
about the smell
of urine and such
and she pointed to a tent
over the field
near a small outhouse
where people
were coming and going
that’s it
she said
there
and so she ran ahead
to the tent
and unzipped it
yes this is it
she said excitedly
but she’s not here
do you want to come in
for awhile?
you studied her face
and eyes and that
hair of hers
and said
sure why not
maybe she won’t be back
maybe she’ll fine
some other tent to sleep
not her
Mamie said
she’ll be back
the moaning cow
but why she’s out
we can at least
get down to kissing
and things
sure
you said
entering the tent
behind her gazing
at her pink hot pants
whatever fate brings.
by
Terry Collett
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November 1, 2006 Outside Burgos with Mamie.
March 09, 2013 04:29 AM UTC
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