WWE 2/6/13 Warm Sea: Pacific Temptress

A temptress, this South Pacific

who flows round Rarotonga

adorned in deep indigo with

sequined sparkles she

flounces her white petticoats

to hint at what’s below.

Her mysterious rises and valleys

undulating gracefully rhythmically

erotically soothingly...

There is a vibrant electrical

current in her vibrations

of light and energy.

We are under the spell,

beholden to our Pacific captor

in adoration of even her shadows,

her torrents, and temper tantrums.

Nui Aroha Much love

Challenge: Write a story, picture essay or poem about the sea. A warm, lovely sea.

Comments: 25

Alison H. Feb 7, 2013, 12:54am UTC

Yes, of course she is female. We KNEW that. Wonderful portrait! :-D

Alison H. Feb 7, 2013, 12:54am UTC

Now, please check out my new poem... ;-)

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 1:53am UTC

thank you dear, Alison. I am forever grateful!

Granny Janny Feb 7, 2013, 2:44am UTC

Aha! You found it!

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Granny Janny Feb 7, 2013, 2:49am UTC

You paint a frilly filly of a sea
Well picked words have enchanted me
For deftly sharing your Pacific views
Your poem is now featured on The Muse!

Alison H. Feb 7, 2013, 1:58pm UTC

Love the repartee, and a well-deserved feature. :-)

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 5:15pm UTC

Thank you, Dahling
for thoughts so enthralling
Delighted am I
with the MUSE to fly

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wendy st. john-devereaux Feb 7, 2013, 5:32am UTC

ts painted a lovely picture of the sea---i really enjoyed this so much...

blessings

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 5:40pm UTC

Thank you so very much, Wendy

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Cynthia C. Feb 7, 2013, 8:14am UTC

Thank you for sharing with us at Sadies Points :)

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JOHN BECK Feb 7, 2013, 8:28am UTC

Well done--a prize with or without the prompt.

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 5:41pm UTC

I certainly do appreciate that comment

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A. F. Stewart Feb 7, 2013, 8:36am UTC

A vivid and lovely poem; love the imagery.

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 5:42pm UTC

And I thank you so very much for your comment

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Kevin E. Feb 7, 2013, 2:47pm UTC

What a beautiful poem! Your poem helps your readers to see the South pacific as a living vibrant almost human like being. Your talent like waves on a pristine beach in the South pacific grows more and more magnificent.

Priscilla P. Feb 7, 2013, 5:44pm UTC

That about blows me away, Kevin. I am so grateful for that magnanimous compliment so graciously received!!

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Verie Sandborg Feb 8, 2013, 1:35pm UTC

To my knowledge, I've never been near the South Seas. But I'm enjoying them in your posts.

Priscilla P. Feb 9, 2013, 1:50am UTC

Thank you, Verie. did it warm up in the Chicago area?

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DarkBeauty 73 (Melanie) Feb 8, 2013, 4:58pm UTC

Features at Sadies Points - 2/7/2013

Priscilla P. Feb 9, 2013, 1:50am UTC

Thank you so very very much. I really appreciate that

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J. Reid Feb 8, 2013, 6:01pm UTC

Smiles...

Thank you for submitting to: Not Gathering Dust!

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Mariana T. Feb 12, 2013, 12:35pm UTC

beautiful sistah - I love the womanly frilly feeling and the indigo and all that shine - I'm sure your smile is just as bright! Salud

Priscilla P. Feb 12, 2013, 3:59pm UTC

She's a moody one as well--all the more enchanting.
How are you getting along these days? What have you been up to?

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Pam Brittain Feb 13, 2013, 12:07pm UTC

Priscilla, I love this and I almost missed it. Good thing you realized that we weren't hooked up. I now have it linked in today's WWE challenge and since it's my day, you are now featured on Gather Writing Essentials.

Priscilla P. Feb 13, 2013, 3:21pm UTC

I am most grateful for the feature and your kind words.

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