by Barbara H.
Member since:
July 13, 2009

I WONDER.....01.15.2013.....Barbara H.....

January 15, 2013 09:53 AM UTC (Updated: January 15, 2013 09:57 AM UTC)
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...I wonder...

is there a wondrous love

within each

and every heart...

a love that would forever

live...

e'en though only part

for is love as strong

within

so deep within the soul

can it call upon the other

to bring a love to whole

I wonder how a love transcends

across all time and space

to finally bring together

that warm and close embrace

to feel that final deep, deep sigh

as if the stars have left the sky

to enter two souls and finely shine

upon a love called yours and mine

 

all the world should share in this

the final reaching of tender bliss

and though its just in fantasy

this love that's felt stays real, you see

 

to share it all through space and time

gives final reason to every rhyme

keeps hope alive in all one feels

from fantasy to love thats real

 

I wish for all the world to know

such a love that warms and glows

begins with waking and lasts through night

to dawn again with morning light.

 

01.15.2013

Barbara H.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments: 17

J. Reid Jan 15, 2013, 10:43am UTC
Smiles...

Thank you for submitting to: Not Gathering Dust!
Kathryn Flynn Jan 15, 2013, 10:59am UTC
One driving force that keeps us driving through every misery, is love...
ben Surbana Jan 15, 2013, 11:01am UTC
Depend upon it. There is nothing more real...
Douglas Raymond ROSE Jan 15, 2013, 11:43am UTC
What a great word painting of Love.
And the Greatest of these is---LOVE
Audrey Howitt Jan 15, 2013, 12:50pm UTC
Such a powerful emotion--great write!
Kevin E. Jan 15, 2013, 1:28pm UTC
This is a beautiful poem with a meter than has a bounce to it. I have to read your poem over and over again. The quality of your work continues to amaze and delight me.
wendy st. john-devereaux Jan 15, 2013, 2:25pm UTC
ahhh, love!...a great subject...and this was a great read

blessings
Heather - child of God, C. Jan 15, 2013, 3:06pm UTC
Well done! Bravo!
Heather - child of God, C. Jan 15, 2013, 3:07pm UTC
test
marie Pinschmidt Jan 15, 2013, 3:30pm UTC
Once again, I can relate. Beautiful writing, Barbara.
JOHN BECK Jan 15, 2013, 8:23pm UTC
I love the way you dream, Barbara.
Love is the Force. May the Force be with you.
Olive Rossi Jan 15, 2013, 9:18pm UTC
I love it! I can feel the love now.
KittyKutabare aka Candy Pole Jan 16, 2013, 7:15am UTC


Thanks for sharing in the Triple Name Club.
Ann Marcaida Jan 16, 2013, 12:48pm UTC
The words are all there, but I would edit one more time for form. Thanks for sharing with Gather's Luminous Writers and Artists.
Barbara H. Jan 16, 2013, 1:35pm UTC
Thank you, I will!
Earl Shugerman Jan 16, 2013, 2:02pm UTC
Well done and greetings.

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