PAIN

Though pain shoots through me,

I continue with my day.

Meds don't stop completely,

For relief is what I pray.

Though I believe You can heal,

I can't accept for me.

I know Your love is real,

But for me can't be.

Help me accept Your love,

And let me see.

That You don't just sit above,

You live inside of me.

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Kevin E. Jan 11, 2013, 7:57am UTC

Your poem is chock full of emotion creating great sympathy for the subject of your poem from this reader. It seems to me that the subject is crying out for someone to care. Another very very nice poem ma'am.

Christine K. Jan 11, 2013, 8:19am UTC

Thank you Kevin. I appreciate your understanding of the poem. I've found that people who suffer with pain do really want someone to care :0).

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Nancy S. Jan 11, 2013, 9:17am UTC

Accepting life and having faith is one of life's hardest lessons Christine. Your words make us feel the soul.

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Betty S. Jan 11, 2013, 11:26am UTC

You did well on this one Christine.. It has a lot of feeling in it!

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Nora D. Jan 11, 2013, 3:42pm UTC

Wow.....a very powerful, emotional poem, Christine.....pain is so real, so intense. Thanks for sharing this!

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Shaunee C. Jan 11, 2013, 6:31pm UTC

Very nice and powerful poem.

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Carrie Marie P. Jan 12, 2013, 12:01am UTC

Amen.. HE does care and is a very important part of us if we are willing to accept HIM to take care of us.

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Marilyn M. Jan 12, 2013, 1:07am UTC

Bless your heart. Accepting healing is not easy.

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Vicky K. Jan 12, 2013, 4:18pm UTC

Nice to see a post here. We understand your pain.

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