by mandy s.

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March 7, 2009

Waited for you to call

August 09, 2012 12:43 PM UTC

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I waited for you to call,

but looks as though you're not going to at all

you so easily left me, without even so much as to explain why?

I believed in me..

in you ..

believed together we'd see it all through!

We were to be free soon of all our hellish miseries,

I meant it when I said, i'd never leave your side even long

after we've grown old and died

Everything you said..

you lied..

I don't understand why?

Just know I tried

Appereant you've chosen for our time to end..

not even permitting me to be your friend,

why did it all have to be so..so pretend?

Can't you see?!?

You had someone finally true

who had loved you for you

waiting so loyally for you to be free..

I guess you needed more than me..

I waited for you to call...

but looks like you're not going to at all..

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Comments: 14

Karen E. Aug 9, 2012, 1:59pm UTC

Sad. It is heart breaking when a lover disappoints us.

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Adelaide M. Aug 9, 2012, 2:30pm UTC

Thanks for posting to Point Taken. Have a great afternoon!

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Betty S. Aug 9, 2012, 2:48pm UTC

So many people end up being hurt by a lover.. this is a nice poem and writing is healing.

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Darin Waugh Aug 9, 2012, 4:00pm UTC

Nice!

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David Prosser Aug 9, 2012, 4:23pm UTC

Nicely done Mandy. x

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David Prosser Aug 9, 2012, 4:23pm UTC

Nicely done Mandy. x

mandy s. Aug 10, 2012, 2:16am UTC

thank you david xx

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A. F. Stewart Aug 9, 2012, 4:59pm UTC

An excellently crafted poem, very poignant.

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Beth J. Aug 10, 2012, 8:29am UTC

Thanks for sharing on Getting to 3000 Together

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Cynthia C. Aug 10, 2012, 10:00am UTC

Thank you for sharing and posting to Sadies Points :) Have a great day!

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donald lewis Sep 7, 2012, 11:20pm UTC

very nicely done Mandy

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Don .... Oct 31, 2012, 10:17pm UTC

:)

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AMY BOSTWICK Mar 28, 2013, 12:53pm UTC

Thanks for sharing with Chat With Me!

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AMY BOSTWICK Apr 8, 2013, 6:40pm UTC

Congradulations your content got 50 views and has been removed from Chat With Me.

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