by Marge H.
Member since:
March 15, 2007

Ode to Wiggling Willy

June 10, 2012 01:21 PM UTC
views: 0 | 4 people recommend this | comments: 17


There is an angler from Wales
Who names every worm he impales
The more Willy wiggles
The more the fish giggles
Beware of cute little wiggles


Comments: 17

Pam Brittain Jun 10, 2012, 2:36pm UTC
Marge, this is darling.
Marge H. Jun 10, 2012, 4:44pm UTC
Thanks Pam. Glad you enjoyed it. I was in a silly mood this morning.
Betty S. Jun 10, 2012, 7:47pm UTC
This is cute,
Marge H. Jun 11, 2012, 12:00pm UTC
Thank you, Betty.
Betty S. Jun 11, 2012, 12:08pm UTC
You are welcome Marge.
JOHN BECK Jun 10, 2012, 11:11pm UTC
Cute limerick, Marge.
Marge H. Jun 11, 2012, 12:00pm UTC
Thanks, John. Not quite a traditional limerick as line 5 doesn't rhyme with lines 1 and 2.
William Dotani Jun 18, 2012, 2:13am UTC
Think of what she is saying John and how this is code for anglers in Sturgeon Bay. You'll be at home wondering why the apples are already fully grown and of course this a distraction. It's not global warming, but all the methane in Wisconsin: The greatest producer politician Ryan.
JOHN BECK Jun 18, 2012, 8:06am UTC
:)
Marge H. Jun 18, 2012, 9:53am UTC
Hope you had a wonderful Father's Day, John and William.
JOHN BECK Jun 18, 2012, 5:05pm UTC
Thanks, Marge.
William Dotani Jun 13, 2012, 2:48am UTC
I feel like a jingle and jangle. This is neat.
Marge H. Jun 13, 2012, 9:51am UTC
Thank you, William. I had fun writing it.
William Dotani Jun 18, 2012, 2:06am UTC
That's obvious.
There is a metaphor in your verse I could concur, but I shall remain silent.
Marge H. Jun 18, 2012, 9:39am UTC
LOL. I'm not saying anything either.
t b. Jun 23, 2012, 1:05pm UTC
I miss fishing!

Cute poem, though the metaphor iludes me.
Marge H. Jun 23, 2012, 1:24pm UTC
Glad you enjoyed it, Terri.

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