by Debbie W.

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April 24, 2007

Fibonacci Poem (MP2012) Water Dance

April 23, 2012 04:59 PM UTC

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Water Dance

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Splash

Swell

Ripple

Skip a stone

Across the water

As undulations and whitecaps

Crash, break, crest, swirl, and our hearts palpitate in rhythm

Follow these rules:

Today's prompt: use any or all of the elements in word or idea--earth, air, fire, water
Your Fibonacci poem can be as long as you want, but at least five lines of words.
Publish so that the date stamped is April 23rd with only one stamp-date
Tag with MP2012
Publish to Mindful Poetry (and other groups as you wish)

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Susan Budig - Mindful Poet

Atticus *.

Doug Westberg

Pam Brittain

Diane Huizenga

Comments: 23

Darin Waugh Apr 23, 2012, 5:19pm UTC

Nice!

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:45pm UTC

Thank you, Darin!

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A. F. Stewart Apr 23, 2012, 5:51pm UTC

A wonderful poem.

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:45pm UTC

Thanks AF!

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JOHN BECK Apr 23, 2012, 6:34pm UTC

Well done, Debbie.

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:45pm UTC

Thank you John!

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Sandy Moore Apr 23, 2012, 7:21pm UTC

I feel like I am there.

Thank you for sharing with Watching The Wind Blow By

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:45pm UTC

Thanks, Sandy, that's such a great compliment!

Sandy Moore Apr 25, 2012, 2:37am UTC

You did a great job with this. We need to talk sometime.

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Virginia M. Apr 23, 2012, 7:33pm UTC

I like it:)

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:46pm UTC

Thanks, Virginia!

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Diane Huizenga Apr 23, 2012, 8:52pm UTC

very nice

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:46pm UTC

Thanks, Diane!

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Pam Brittain Apr 23, 2012, 9:09pm UTC

I like it too.

Debbie W. Apr 23, 2012, 9:46pm UTC

Thanks, Pam!

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Doug Westberg Apr 23, 2012, 11:20pm UTC

Very onomatopoetic! Well done!

Debbie W. Apr 25, 2012, 9:01am UTC

Thanks so much Doug!

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Atticus *. Apr 23, 2012, 11:25pm UTC

"Palpitate" how nice for skipping stones!

Debbie W. Apr 25, 2012, 9:02am UTC

Thank you, Atticus!

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Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Apr 23, 2012, 11:50pm UTC

I sometimes feel like my heart is palpitating like those waves are moving!

You
have
earned a
snazzy spot:
Mindful Poetry.

Debbie W. Apr 25, 2012, 9:02am UTC

Thanks so much Susan! Enjoyed this one!

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Bernard C. Apr 24, 2012, 5:21am UTC

Joyful and playful too :-)

Debbie W. Apr 25, 2012, 9:02am UTC

Thanks so much for your comment Bernard!

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