Fibonacci Energy Poem for Mindful Poetry April...

Each number equals a syllable in the poem.. Here is the sequence of numbers. 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21,

Today's prompt: use any or all of the elements in word or idea--earth, air, fire, water
Publish so that the date stamped is April 23rd with only one stamp-date
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The five traditional Chinese elements are Water, Wood, Fire, Earth and Metal. These are the five basic forms of energy, which are constantly being transformed from one into another throughout the natural world

*0*

Earth

Alive

Earth- Supports

Water-Solitude

Fire-Self Expression Element

Wood is the energy of Leadership and Planning

Metal Energy is Precision, Meticulous, Logical and Moderation

Five elements are energy within the body

Water balances Fire: Wood-Earth

Fire controls Metal

Earth-Water

Metal-

Wood

Health

Comments: 20

JOHN BECK Apr 23, 2012, 4:18pm UTC

Even with this skillfully crafted mirror fibonacci poem, there's an unexpected ending in monosyllable. Excellent, Richard.

Richard Lynn Livesay Apr 23, 2012, 4:48pm UTC

I learned from the master, Sir John Beck

Irina Dimitric Apr 23, 2012, 6:24pm UTC

So that's called a mirror fibonacci poem. You are both such talented poets.

Richard Lynn Livesay Apr 23, 2012, 6:26pm UTC

I bow for both...you are good too...keep doing it

elizabeth evans Apr 23, 2012, 9:47pm UTC

Amazingly well done.

Richard Lynn Livesay Apr 24, 2012, 12:11am UTC

I am humbled and I thank you, elizabeth

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A. F. Stewart Apr 23, 2012, 5:52pm UTC

A most excellent poem.

Richard Lynn Livesay Apr 23, 2012, 6:24pm UTC

Thank you, AF, I had trouble expressing the reality of this due to the form but if people are interested in it they can look up as it goes back to chinese medicine

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