Mindful Poetry for April 10

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Peter Joseph Swanson Apr 10, 2012, 12:51pm UTC

Yeah!

Dennis Gilman Apr 10, 2012, 12:59pm UTC

Thanks Peter.

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Morgan S. Apr 10, 2012, 3:53pm UTC

i like this one too

Dennis Gilman Apr 11, 2012, 2:16pm UTC

Thanks.

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Denise L. Apr 10, 2012, 5:51pm UTC

Me too, Dennis. Me too.

Dennis Gilman Apr 11, 2012, 2:17pm UTC

Thanks Denise.

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Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Apr 10, 2012, 6:14pm UTC

You've taken this form and had fun with it, I see. :-)

Senyru poetry like this definitely appears at Mindful Poetry.

Dennis Gilman Apr 11, 2012, 2:21pm UTC

Yes I did. Thanks. And thanks also to Peter Joseph Swanson who was a great help to me at improving my ability with Senryus and Haikus.

Has Peter submitted any?

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Kingston Kaprinski Apr 10, 2012, 8:21pm UTC

Declarative & plain spoken, just like the power & beauty of truth. Outstanding.

Dennis Gilman Apr 11, 2012, 2:23pm UTC

Many thanks Kingston

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Atticus *. Apr 11, 2012, 12:07am UTC

Direct. This has a very redemptive tone. Nice

Dennis Gilman Apr 11, 2012, 2:24pm UTC

How come you noticed that? That was very good! I was talking to myself :-D

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Patricia J. Apr 15, 2012, 11:15am UTC

I've said exactly that same thing to myself, more times than I can count!

Dennis Gilman Apr 16, 2012, 11:31am UTC

:-D

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