Summer Monkeys

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21 Summer Monkeys

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She summered here, in these woods,

the mall-road ending in the restaurant with the hot-coco sign,

spent nights in the Maple Lodge,

woke up lonely for her father.

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Visionaerie B. Apr 7, 2012, 10:09pm UTC

Very nice and I can see the monkeys scurrying away like a puff of hairy smoke! Thanks for sharing this.

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Len Maxwell Apr 7, 2012, 11:21pm UTC

Nicely done and Visionaerie's description is spot on.

Thanks for sharing with The Triple Name Club.

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Angela A. Apr 8, 2012, 4:17pm UTC

That was a beautiful poem

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Priya P. Apr 8, 2012, 11:14pm UTC

Your imagination never ceases to amaze me.
Thank you for sharing with the The Surreal Circus.

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Ann Marcaida Apr 9, 2012, 12:01pm UTC

The last three lines that I read on your blog are amazing and visionary. I still feel uneasy about you sharing half-poems with Gather's Luminous Writers and Artists, though, Kushal.

As someone who also has an external blog, I know how hard it is to drive traffic there. One thing you could do to increase traffic at your blog (if you don't do this already) is answer every comment.

Allen H. Apr 10, 2012, 7:12am UTC

I do not think it is right to use Gather this way,
so I'll just read the four lines on this display...

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amy s. Apr 12, 2012, 12:29pm UTC

this was not accepted at collaborative artworks due to it being a link to another site.

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