by Sheila Deeth
Member since:
February 1, 2007

genre shorties and random word generators

March 27, 2012 02:15 PM UTC (Updated: March 30, 2012 09:30 PM UTC)
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Dripping seasoned arguments

Divorcing love from reasoning

Man sends

His lover packing.

Check the hall.

Another suitcase stands

And she with open hands returns

Attacking.

 

Derived from the random words Dripping, Divorce, Hall, and Check

Comments: 13

JOHN BECK Mar 27, 2012, 2:22pm UTC
Creative. Excellent!
Pam Brittain Mar 27, 2012, 3:27pm UTC
I love this one.
Tracy Fabre Mar 27, 2012, 3:47pm UTC
So... that went well! Part Two: Making Bail.
A. F. Stewart Mar 27, 2012, 4:01pm UTC
Sounds like a case of the fury of a woman scorned.
Granny Janny Mar 27, 2012, 7:14pm UTC
This is poetry! You could post for a feature to Poet's Weekly Muse if you like.
Sheila Deeth Mar 30, 2012, 9:31pm UTC
Done. I ought to visit your muse more often. Thanks.
Granny Janny Mar 30, 2012, 9:46pm UTC
Now featured. Thanks, Sheila!
Creative!
Patricia J. Mar 28, 2012, 9:06am UTC
This is fantastic, Sheila, in just a few short words she gets dumped and revenge!
Angela A. Mar 28, 2012, 8:42pm UTC
Wonderful my friend
Can you post this to my group, Anythingwriting ?
Sheila Deeth Mar 30, 2012, 9:30pm UTC
Thanks for the reminder Angela. I forgot.
Angela A. Mar 31, 2012, 6:22pm UTC
That's great, I'm glad I can say..
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jeanne clarke Mar 31, 2012, 3:36pm UTC
Ah, those dripping arguments - far worse than a dripping nose or faucet!

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