by Stacey Mamasaid
Member since:
August 15, 2006

Subjection Reflection

January 13, 2012 09:41 PM UTC (Updated: January 13, 2012 09:43 PM UTC)
views: 0 | 11 people recommend this | comments: 25

Mini me

Can't you see

What future

Stands to be?


Sweet shortcake

Give don't take

What a real

Women makes.


Azure eyes

Warm surprise

Tell the truth

Never lies.


Brightly shine

All the time

Never dull

Fine sublime.


Stellar art

Rhythmic heart

Got the beat

Play the part.


Go for all

Stand up tall

Feel no shame

Heed the call.


Dream on clouds

Laugh out loud

Dismiss pain

Always proud.


Angel wings

Lovely things

Heaven scent

Cherubs bring.


Closest friend

To the end

Sometimes breaks

Never bends.


Dare to fight

Grow to light

Catch that star

Shining bright.


© Stacey Mamasaid 2012 All Rights Reserved

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Comments: 25

JOHN BECK Jan 13, 2012, 9:48pm UTC
Near perfection, no rejection.
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:09pm UTC
Thank you, love the rhyme!
Kevin E. Jan 13, 2012, 11:13pm UTC
Wonderful poem!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:09pm UTC
Thank you!
Len Maxwell Jan 13, 2012, 11:14pm UTC
Very nicely done. The picture and song are very good matches for the poem.

Thanks for posting to the Wall of Women on The Triple Name Club where it's now featured.
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:10pm UTC
Thanks, I'm honored!
Desiree T. Jan 14, 2012, 8:30am UTC
Wouldn't it be nice to be able to have told yourself these things!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:10pm UTC
It sure would :)
RedBird. B. Jan 14, 2012, 11:33am UTC
Stacey, I enjoyed your Poem!

Nice Writting!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:10pm UTC
Thank you!
Chris Brockman Jan 14, 2012, 11:48am UTC
Right on, Stacey!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 12:10pm UTC
Thanks!
Rachel D. Jan 14, 2012, 1:25pm UTC
Thanks!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 2:47pm UTC
Good to see you - thanks!
darleny san Jan 14, 2012, 3:39pm UTC
Very nice! love it
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 5:58pm UTC
Thank you!
elizabeth evans Jan 14, 2012, 3:53pm UTC
I must say
With affection
your introspection
is spot on.
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 5:59pm UTC
Another fantastic rhyme - and thanks!
Janie E. Jan 14, 2012, 5:58pm UTC
Beautifully done, Stacey!!!
Stacey Mamasaid Jan 14, 2012, 5:59pm UTC
Hi Janie, thank you!
Janie E. Jan 14, 2012, 6:02pm UTC
Hola, Stacey!!!! You're very welcomed!
Angela A. Jan 14, 2012, 8:52pm UTC
Lovely poem and awesome song!
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Stacey Mamasaid Jan 15, 2012, 12:58pm UTC
Thank Angela!
Mariana T. Jan 16, 2012, 6:18pm UTC
Sistah, you are certainly on a writing role! Go for it - love this - so you! Salud
Heather Reid Jan 16, 2012, 9:54pm UTC
This is a great poem! Thank you for sharing with us!

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