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Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 22, 2011, 3:05am UTC

ir is a good poem with clear images

JOHN BECK Dec 22, 2011, 7:07am UTC

Hello, Dr. Saxena. Good to see you back.

Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 22, 2011, 7:37am UTC

Hi john I missed u hope to share again

Kathryn Flynn Dec 22, 2011, 9:56am UTC

Hello Doctor --- soooo good to see you back again!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 11:23am UTC

papa, good to see you .You are in my thoughts,always

William Dotani Dec 23, 2011, 2:48am UTC

Happy holidays Dr. Saxena. I believe women wear many colorful baubles on their wrist this time of year. I hope you have enjoyment in Temple/Shrine festivities. Namaste.

Interesting your daughter calls you Papa. My children call me Papa.

Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 26, 2011, 5:48am UTC

thanks william a papa sharing with papa is a pleasure.

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William Dotani Dec 22, 2011, 3:37am UTC

Your fifth line touched me in truths.

Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 22, 2011, 7:39am UTC

ur right I also felt like that

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 11:23am UTC

Dear William,I am glad that I still know to type.I thought I lost that skill, too.Thanks

William Dotani Dec 23, 2011, 2:51am UTC

Writing yarns and poems is my hobby.
You should have no problems given your experiences and large vocabulary.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 25, 2011, 6:06pm UTC

ha ha William.You gave me great energy.regards!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Nov 17, 2012, 8:44pm UTC

Dear Bill, each year resolutions are flooded with house-hold errands.Again the muse kept sleeping.

William Dotani Nov 18, 2012, 4:34am UTC

My body weakens, but my ideas strengthen.

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JOHN BECK Dec 22, 2011, 7:06am UTC

It's like a medley of poem, Buzzy. Nice way to introduce today's dawn. I hope all is well with you and our family.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 11:24am UTC

Hi Dear John,all is well here.The family Maze is sweetly terrible.Thanks.

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Kathryn Flynn Dec 22, 2011, 9:57am UTC

So beautiful, Buzzy. I am so glad to see you back again.

Happy holidays to you and let's keep in touch. you have my fon, yes?

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 11:25am UTC

Dear Kathryn, thanks for the freedom to call you.I was so happy.thank you and best wishes

Kathryn Flynn Dec 22, 2011, 12:08pm UTC

best wishes!!

Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 26, 2011, 5:55am UTC

my best wishes for the new year

JOHN BECK Nov 17, 2012, 8:45pm UTC

Good to see you back, Buzzy. I know you've been a busy family.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Nov 17, 2012, 8:45pm UTC

The sun goes down
It comes again, quite fast
Trees, carrying their treeish lives
Closets frowning at summer clothes
A poem, fractured last year
Crawling and relaxing
Intriguing Silence...hibernating from a long time.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Nov 17, 2012, 8:48pm UTC

John, I miss Gather A LOT...from last 2 years I don't know where am I stuck? really finding myself in wrong places may be or just wasting my time in completing chores..you guys are so patient with me,alaways welcomed me home.no words to thank you...I am missing you all..

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Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 11:22am UTC

@papa, John,Kathryn and William.Thanks for your comments and wishes.

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Kasey Klein Dec 22, 2011, 1:08pm UTC

lovely

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 22, 2011, 2:04pm UTC

Hi Karl!

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Marilyn (PaintsOnSlate) S. Dec 22, 2011, 3:56pm UTC

Well done!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 12:15am UTC

Thanks,Marilyn

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Larry H. Dec 22, 2011, 4:13pm UTC

nice thanks for sharing

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 12:16am UTC

Thanks, Larry

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Donald M. Dec 22, 2011, 7:17pm UTC

Such a lovely trip in words.
Merry Christmas from my family to yours.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 12:16am UTC

Thanks Norma.much love

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Angela A. Dec 22, 2011, 10:50pm UTC

Very beautiful!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 12:16am UTC

Thanks Angela.Happy holidays.

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Granny Janny Dec 23, 2011, 2:19am UTC

My favorite lines are 4,5,6.
So good so see you here!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 2:16pm UTC

Hi Jan,good to reconnect with lovely friends.Thank you.

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William Dotani Dec 23, 2011, 4:13am UTC

Your writings are so streak free clear with perfect grammar and your metaphor is very fitting and easy to understand. Do you doubt your ability? I certainly don't. You are one writing who consistently produces quality. I like reading what you write. You put so much effort into word patterning and I appreciate the vibe this gives your words of personal caring in wanting to be a positive voice of reason and message to your audience, so they can enjoy within your words your joyful reality.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 2:19pm UTC

I am in tears William.Last few years I kept myself in diferent zone just to mee tother errands.Your upliting words is boosting my morale and again, ready to give my self some quality time.Thank you William dotani.I ahve no words to reply for this precious comment.Regards!

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 2:21pm UTC

William Dotani,will save your words>Your writings are so streak free clear with perfect grammar and your metaphor is very fitting and easy to understand. Do you doubt your ability? I certainly don't. You are one writing who consistently produces quality. I like reading what you write. You put so much effort into word patterning and I appreciate the vibe this gives your words of personal caring in wanting to be a positive voice of reason and message to your audience, so they can enjoy within your words your joyful reality.

William Dotani Dec 25, 2011, 4:11am UTC

I know not how to reply. I am honored. I just spoke the truth. I hope life is always good and beautiful for you.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 25, 2011, 6:06pm UTC

you are always Kind,William.Love!

Dr. Ashok Saxena Dec 26, 2011, 5:54am UTC

take william seriously he is a great critic

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Stirling D. Dec 23, 2011, 11:36am UTC

Interesting, I like it. Oh, yes, that third line! It is great to see you again, Buzzy.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 23, 2011, 2:16pm UTC

Oh thanks Stirling.missed the board like anything.love you.

Stirling D. Dec 23, 2011, 5:41pm UTC

Thanks, Buzzy - love you too. That's a gorgeous cardinal.

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Dec 25, 2011, 6:06pm UTC

Thanks Stirling!

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Priya P. Dec 26, 2011, 1:44pm UTC

The last three lines are just so beautiful. I am very partial to poetry about sunrises, sunsets, nature. Yours is just beautiful.

It's so sweet that your papa is here to comment, I'm very jealous! My dad reads mine as well and then facebooks me ... ahhhh technology!

Sun sets, fingers touch
Heart ponders the idea
Two worlds merging
A love is born

Your poem inspires :)

Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Aug 31, 2012, 2:26pm UTC

A poem fractured last year, mend this year.You're so right Priya.He is there like yours to praise me.Lucky we are.

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